Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks again for sharing this lovely tribute about your wonderful husband, Wayne. I like how you used the honeysuckle because it does give a memorable fragrance. Glad that you share his memories with us, Patricia. Hope the packing is going well.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Helen. The packing will get a good start next week as I am hiring a lady to help me sort out things and pack. My son-in-law said for me not to worry about it as I would be surprised how much he can pack in 5 days.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat

= This is such a lovely tribute to your hubby.
= Indeed, you will meet again.
= True love lasts for eternity, for sure.

= It's nice to be back. However, I will be reading/reviewing/posting here and there, as I still have a lot going on. Seems to be my way of life of late. Albeit, all is good--just busy.

Cheers, J
(*<*) A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*<*)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Jackie. My moving date is bu 37 days away now.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, what a lovely tribute for your late husband, Wayne. I loved it, as he would, I'm sure. This was my favorite verse:

You were the sweetest fragrance
that filled the still morning air
I turned to look and I found
you were no longer there.

I think that is just beautiful and I have no suggestions for improving this heartfelt work, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Anastasia.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Patricia. I know exactly what you mean, me having lost Robert in January. Your poem is nicely composed--sweeter than honeysuckle--one of the sweetest scents there is. My best wishes to you. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Marilyn. My move is but 37 days away.

reply by BeasPeas on 27-Mar-2018

Time is getting short. A mixture of feelings, I'm sure. Are you excited about your new adventure? I hope so. Each move for me added a new page to my life story. I'm sure it will do the same for you, too. Marilyn

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Your verse is a lovely tribute to your departed husband.
The love is shown clearly throughout the well rhymed lines.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Sharon.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

What an exquisite heartfelt tribute to a dearly departed spouse filled with love and longing -'Time's taken some of the pain'- an immortal sentiment expressed here- I know this excruciating pain, my beloved husband departed this life some years ago also and I miss him every day-thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Zanya.

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

A glorious photo to compliment your poem. Nothing ever dies my friend; your poem was sad but hopeful in the end. If we hang on to them, they can't get on with their work on the other side. He sees you darling.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great tribute to Wayne. I enjoyed reading Patricia. This is a great presentation--I like the picture, the color scheme, the rhymes, & most of all your heart-felt message. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thank you for the review, Jan.