Your Honeysuckle Scent
Tribute to my long gone spouse (free verse)18 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your tribute to your husband in this love poem, along with the stunning artwork. You were very blessed to have him in your life. I admired your rhymes and "honeysuckle scent" simile and "vine" metaphor. Warm regards- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thank you for sharing your tribute to your husband in this love poem, along with the stunning artwork. You were very blessed to have him in your life. I admired your rhymes and "honeysuckle scent" simile and "vine" metaphor. Warm regards- Joan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I am so far behind with my upcoming move that this is a copy and paste reply. Please forgive me.
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No forgiveness necessary--I am behind as usual and don't have moving as an excuse! Hope the move is going smoothly--I'll be helping my son with one tomorrow. Best wishes- Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned about your husband, that you loved so much. You used great words and lovely art work. I can not even imagine how you must feel my friend. The only good thing is that one day you will see him again. I know it can't help a lot, but we have the Holy Spirit with us! Thanks for God! love, Teri
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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This is a very well written poem you have penned about your husband, that you loved so much. You used great words and lovely art work. I can not even imagine how you must feel my friend. The only good thing is that one day you will see him again. I know it can't help a lot, but we have the Holy Spirit with us! Thanks for God! love, Teri
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the nice review, Teri.
Comment from Sasha
You are so right, many never experience this type of love. I agree, you are blessed to have had it and to continue to feel it too. Beautiful poem that touches the heart.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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You are so right, many never experience this type of love. I agree, you are blessed to have had it and to continue to feel it too. Beautiful poem that touches the heart.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Sasha.
Comment from Heather Knight
I find this poem extremely moving. My husband is also like the wind beneath my broken wings and I can't stand the idea of his going before me.
Thanks for sharing your feelings. As you say, one day you will be with him again.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I find this poem extremely moving. My husband is also like the wind beneath my broken wings and I can't stand the idea of his going before me.
Thanks for sharing your feelings. As you say, one day you will be with him again.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Maria.
Comment from judiverse
A beautiful presentation. This flows very smoothly and the word choices are great. Honeysuckle scent is very descriptive. You carry out that reference when you add sweetest fragrance later on. You really do a great job of conveying your sense of loss, and the feeling that you will see him again. judi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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A beautiful presentation. This flows very smoothly and the word choices are great. Honeysuckle scent is very descriptive. You carry out that reference when you add sweetest fragrance later on. You really do a great job of conveying your sense of loss, and the feeling that you will see him again. judi
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Judi. I really never thought I would live this long after he passed away, I am coming up on 23 years.
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You're very welcome. You're around for a purpose, so don't worry about all the years. judi
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a warm heartfelt tribute to your husband. Your love for him could be felt in every line. It'll be a glorious day for you, a very sad one for us we you meet again.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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This is a warm heartfelt tribute to your husband. Your love for him could be felt in every line. It'll be a glorious day for you, a very sad one for us we you meet again.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Misty.
Comment from jaded831
Beautifully written, I feel your emotion in every line. I have never experienced that kind of love in my life, perhaps I never will. Thank you for allowing to celebrate your love, your poem is heartwarming. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Beautifully written, I feel your emotion in every line. I have never experienced that kind of love in my life, perhaps I never will. Thank you for allowing to celebrate your love, your poem is heartwarming. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, jaded.
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
I can relate to your every word for God blessed me with a loving caring man who love me and my four children as if they were his.
In fact he ways said theses are our children
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
it is a perfect match
I can relate to your every word for God blessed me with a loving caring man who love me and my four children as if they were his.
In fact he ways said theses are our children
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the lovely review, Cookie.
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good morning,and you are very welcome.
cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a great tribute to your husband and the pain of grief never really goes does it Patricia, I feel the same about my husband, sweet words here and you are still blessed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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This is a great tribute to your husband and the pain of grief never really goes does it Patricia, I feel the same about my husband, sweet words here and you are still blessed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the review, Dolly.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Very sweet tribute to your husband. How wonderful to have had such a great marriage and to have so many memories that warm the heart and leave a fragrance behind. So many are not so fortunate. Rox
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Very sweet tribute to your husband. How wonderful to have had such a great marriage and to have so many memories that warm the heart and leave a fragrance behind. So many are not so fortunate. Rox
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the review, Roxanna. I know I was truly blessed with a man who never raised his voice to me in nager.
