A Magical Meeting
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Comment from Gloria ....
So beautiful Yvonne. All your words carefully selected and sewn together to make an enchanting poem. From start to finish the resolution of love is clear.
Great job and I believe I'm starting to understand the Triquatrain form a little better. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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So beautiful Yvonne. All your words carefully selected and sewn together to make an enchanting poem. From start to finish the resolution of love is clear.
Great job and I believe I'm starting to understand the Triquatrain form a little better. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing. It's a fun form. I think you'll like it.
Comment from LIJ Red
A leprechaun, most likely, and old legends speak of them having pots of hidden gold.Looks like an excellent triquatrain to me, and definitely more tasteful than roadkill.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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A leprechaun, most likely, and old legends speak of them having pots of hidden gold.Looks like an excellent triquatrain to me, and definitely more tasteful than roadkill.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I wish this could really happen. I enjoyed your poem about roadkill. 8-)
Comment from BeasPeas
Super, super job with this outstanding poem. Rhyming is over the top, as is cadence and flow. Theme is indeed magical. Thank you for sharing a great write. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Super, super job with this outstanding poem. Rhyming is over the top, as is cadence and flow. Theme is indeed magical. Thank you for sharing a great write. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you for a great review. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Yvonne, this is a beautiful poem. It has a dreamlike quality to it. He appeared like in a fairy tale and then disappeared. It really appealed to my imagination. It made me think of an elf. A wonderful poem. All best. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Wow, Yvonne, this is a beautiful poem. It has a dreamlike quality to it. He appeared like in a fairy tale and then disappeared. It really appealed to my imagination. It made me think of an elf. A wonderful poem. All best. Ulla xx
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I was thinking elf, too, as I wrote it. I wish the meeting could come true. Thank you so much for this lovely review.
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I don't blame you, you made it so real. I would like to be there as well. :))
Comment from Liberty Justice
LOVELY! So sweet and entertaining. I feel a tone of innocence and an emotional calm reading this soothing poem. The rhymes are so musical and they sing of a love lost and of wishing to see that love, again. BEAUTIFUL! Check out mine and my 2 books, also. liberty justice
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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LOVELY! So sweet and entertaining. I feel a tone of innocence and an emotional calm reading this soothing poem. The rhymes are so musical and they sing of a love lost and of wishing to see that love, again. BEAUTIFUL! Check out mine and my 2 books, also. liberty justice
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate your lovely comments.
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Thanks! Check out my writings out, also, and my 2 books for sale. liberty justice
Comment from Dean Kuch
Perfect, Yvonne--a perfectly rhymed, well metered and smooth flowing poem.
Rife with fantasy and mystery, even we who are merely readers are left wondering who (or what!) this mysterious flutist might be.
In a word, brilliant.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Perfect, Yvonne--a perfectly rhymed, well metered and smooth flowing poem.
Rife with fantasy and mystery, even we who are merely readers are left wondering who (or what!) this mysterious flutist might be.
In a word, brilliant.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Dean. I really appreciate this awesome review. Good to hear from you. You must email me all your news.
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You're welcome, Yvonne.
I will do that.
~Dean :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely, Yvonne. I love the Leprechaun poem, and would love to meet one and be granted a wish!! LOL. This is a lovely rhyme pattern, smoothly written, with lovely rhythmical lines. The internal and external rhyme makes for an enchanting read, perfect for the subject. You certainly came up trumps with the potlatch challenge, my friend :) Sandra xx.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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That was lovely, Yvonne. I love the Leprechaun poem, and would love to meet one and be granted a wish!! LOL. This is a lovely rhyme pattern, smoothly written, with lovely rhythmical lines. The internal and external rhyme makes for an enchanting read, perfect for the subject. You certainly came up trumps with the potlatch challenge, my friend :) Sandra xx.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, Sandra. Coming from a wonderful poet like you, it means a lot!
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Flattery gets you everywhere!! LOL. :))
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yvonne,
This is an awesome response to the potlatch challenge. First of all, your picture sets the tone of that forest where fairies & other little beings may appear.
Your rhymes are super & sound awesome when read aloud. Your story flows well in a lyrical way, & gives readers a lot to think about. You leave readers with a feeling of mysticism. It would be great to return & see the little fellow again & maybe some others joining him.
Thanks for sharing an awesome poem. Jan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Yvonne,
This is an awesome response to the potlatch challenge. First of all, your picture sets the tone of that forest where fairies & other little beings may appear.
Your rhymes are super & sound awesome when read aloud. Your story flows well in a lyrical way, & gives readers a lot to think about. You leave readers with a feeling of mysticism. It would be great to return & see the little fellow again & maybe some others joining him.
Thanks for sharing an awesome poem. Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I'm so happy you like it. I wish I could experience such an event. 8-)
Comment from Pantygynt
This triquatrain works very well indeed and flows beautifully. I got the feeling that, had you looked carefully on the ground after he had left, you would have seen the small cloven hoof-prints in the soil that Pan leaves behind him.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This triquatrain works very well indeed and flows beautifully. I got the feeling that, had you looked carefully on the ground after he had left, you would have seen the small cloven hoof-prints in the soil that Pan leaves behind him.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Could very well be him. Thank you for reviewing. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Damommy, a lovely poem with a mystic tone. Lovely display with the mossy green emphasised as in your poem. Good rhyme scheme in abcb with good rhythm maintained throughout. Lovely read. Well done and a Potlatch challenge well met - warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hi Damommy, a lovely poem with a mystic tone. Lovely display with the mossy green emphasised as in your poem. Good rhyme scheme in abcb with good rhythm maintained throughout. Lovely read. Well done and a Potlatch challenge well met - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
