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A Magical Meeting

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Who was that?

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Comment from His Grayness
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Certainly, this work is magnificently presented at the outset, with lovely artwork and then the equally lovely poetic dialog flows beautifully into delivering the rare (to me) style of poetry! The mystery of the visitor is also a great twist an I enjoyed this very much with no suggestions for improvement of any kind, HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review this. Much appreciated.
Comment from William Ross
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very good, This is a new style for me, but it reads and flows so well great meter and rhyming pattern. Poem is beautiful as well. Thanks for sharing both the style and poem. have a great day.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you for this wonderful review. I hope you have a great day, too.
Comment from antonieta
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I liked your poem. It has a melancholic tone, good auditive and visual imagery and the choice of words fits the theme of the poem. Thanks for sharing,

Antonieta

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"A Magical Meeting", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review.
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 26-Mar-2018
    damonny, my pen-pushing friend, you're more than welcome.

    Best wishes and God bless you,
    the Duchess
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    And to you, my fellow pen-pusher. 8-)
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you kind Sir............
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a lovely poetry style. It would have to be a challenge to use the triquatrain form, but you pulled it off with such beautiful details. This is a special poem. "Ghostly harmony" but "my heart still hears" really stood out for me.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    I'm glad you liked those phrases. I liked them best, too. Thank you for a delightful review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Friend,
Just magical, mystical, and hauntingly beautiful. And a tad bit eerie! We live on a high on a bluff overlooking both arms of Grand Traverse Bay. Our property is surrounded by acres of hardwoods. I cannot begin to tell you how many times I am working outside and, while I have never been visited by a stranger in the flesh, I have often felt like someone is watching...I have numerous incidents with birds and deer, fox and squirrels, but never a visitor as you describe.
The format of your poem is delicious!
What a wonderful poetic offering!

diane

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you. I'm so happy you liked it. I used to live in the woods, so I can relate to your experiences.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well written Triquatrain poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Teri. Always good to hear from you.
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Your poetry club certainly has inspired some wonderful poetry, my friend - I loved this, and again, I will book shelve it to study the form. It's marvelous, at least as you've used it.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Bless your heart. Thank you so much. You should join us. It's such fun.
reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 26-Mar-2018
    Ooooooooooh! Not enough hours in the day I'm afraid, but thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This triquatrain, A Magical Meeting, uses the format well to tell this mystical story of musical charm that has a happy haunting note. Fun stuff.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
    Thank you for reviewing. Glad you like it.
Comment from June Sargent
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What a great example of a triquatrain! I'm still working on mine. You've penned a fun and magical poem that flowed smoothly and maintained interest to the end. Artwork was perfect!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much. I appreciate that.