The Bottom Flannel Sheet
Comparison between life and the bottom sheet12 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks life is like something fixed or predestined, bound by rules and laws, whatever we do, we cannot violate law of Nature, struggle goes on but we find our place on the sheet not beneath; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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This speaks life is like something fixed or predestined, bound by rules and laws, whatever we do, we cannot violate law of Nature, struggle goes on but we find our place on the sheet not beneath; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for appreciation of my intent to get people to follow the process through as you did. Thank you for your generous review.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this is a unique piece of poetry for the 'meaning of life' competition, and best of luck with this well-written entry. It is a great analogy you've written here, and how we wiggle and struggle in life, just like someone who is trying to get comfortable in bed. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Hello, this is a unique piece of poetry for the 'meaning of life' competition, and best of luck with this well-written entry. It is a great analogy you've written here, and how we wiggle and struggle in life, just like someone who is trying to get comfortable in bed. I noticed no errors and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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I always enjoy your reviews. They have a special energy and perspective. Thank you for affirming my intent to draw the reader in to do some comparisons in their own life.
