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Woman stabbed trying to talk16 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
This is really very short. I am amazed at how writers can cook up a complete full story in just 50 words. You did well here which proved how skilled the writer is in telling stories. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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This is really very short. I am amazed at how writers can cook up a complete full story in just 50 words. You did well here which proved how skilled the writer is in telling stories. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2018
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50 words was indeed a challenge. I had to edit, re-edit, clarify and continue to wonder if it was understood, I hope the judges get it. Thank you so much for reading it.
Comment from Artasylum
Dribble Flash Fiction... Glad I could figure it out and according to the guidelines your are perfect pitch. Imagery is fun. all in all a fun read... yours, diana........
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Dribble Flash Fiction... Glad I could figure it out and according to the guidelines your are perfect pitch. Imagery is fun. all in all a fun read... yours, diana........
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. It was fun to make fun of my name. Welch, I get asked all the time, "LIke the Jelly?" when I meet people.
Comment from Sugarray77
You developed a great entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. The dialogue is all important and you did a wonderful job creating the flow between characters. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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You developed a great entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. The dialogue is all important and you did a wonderful job creating the flow between characters. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. It was fun to make fun of my name. Welch, I get asked all the time, "LIke the Jelly?" when I meet peopl
Comment from Swampfox1
The only complaint I have is that it is too short. Other than that it is well written. I enjoyed the read, what there was of it. Great job, I must say.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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The only complaint I have is that it is too short. Other than that it is well written. I enjoyed the read, what there was of it. Great job, I must say.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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I agree, but it was written in a contest that only allowed between 48 and 52 words. It was hard to limit it. Thank you so much for liking it anyways.
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you're welcome
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, a good entry for the dribble flash fiction contest. I still don't know what the difference is between a flash fiction and a dribble flash fiction, Judy, so maybe you can enlighten me, lol :) I think yours was very good reading, and I get the ending, sticky, like the jelly. I hope that's the case, anyway. Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Hello, a good entry for the dribble flash fiction contest. I still don't know what the difference is between a flash fiction and a dribble flash fiction, Judy, so maybe you can enlighten me, lol :) I think yours was very good reading, and I get the ending, sticky, like the jelly. I hope that's the case, anyway. Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you Ana, I also was trying to use the phrase, sticky subject and change it to sticky suspect. It was a fun but hard write. 50 words are gone in so short of a time. the difference is dribble is only between 48 and 50 words. It is so hard to tell a story with those limitations.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Your short story is fun and funny.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Your short story is fun and funny.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you Sharon, I did enjoy writing it. I always get teased because my name is Welch like the Jelly.
Comment from evilynne
That is certainly fast moving and humorous. The play on words is great. It is certainly a worthy contest entry. Best of luck! Evi
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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That is certainly fast moving and humorous. The play on words is great. It is certainly a worthy contest entry. Best of luck! Evi
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you , I enjoyed writing it. I get teased all the time because my last name is welch like the Jelly.
Comment from antonieta
I liked your piece. I think that writing fanfiction is very difficult but you did well. I think her husband killed her. Thanks for sharing.
Antonieta
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I liked your piece. I think that writing fanfiction is very difficult but you did well. I think her husband killed her. Thanks for sharing.
Antonieta
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, yes he did she just was losing too much blood to remember her and his name so she reverted to Jelly, Welch, and that makes him a sticky suspect ( word play on sticky subject). I appreciate your thoughts
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jusylee72
What a clever use of the mason jar, Welch, jelly , and her husband with the sticky fingers who's fingers were all sticky with (Mason jelly)
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello jusylee72
What a clever use of the mason jar, Welch, jelly , and her husband with the sticky fingers who's fingers were all sticky with (Mason jelly)
Gert
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you I didn't think until the end. It's a play on words from Sticky Subject to Sticy Suspect. I enjoyed writing it.
Thank you so much.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
It may well just be me but I struggled a little with this one. I get the sticky in reference to the jam/canning but feel I'm missing something significant about the husband?
"Tell us! Who did this to you? - need closing speech marks here.
"Jar" - need punctuation before the closing speech marks here.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hi there,
It may well just be me but I struggled a little with this one. I get the sticky in reference to the jam/canning but feel I'm missing something significant about the husband?
"Tell us! Who did this to you? - need closing speech marks here.
"Jar" - need punctuation before the closing speech marks here.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I will go fix those things right away. The Sticky Suspect is supposed to be a play on words like Sticky Subject. We used to use that phrase years ago if the subject of the day was one we would disagree on, so that is the reason for the semi-pun.
