My Brothers' Keeper
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Running to the Unknown"Rachel feels responsible for her brother.
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
How brilliant is that? Using pee as hot water bottles! It's good those bags were leakproof! Your nursing expertise really comes through in this book on survival. I hope Daniel and Gray get there soon!
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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How brilliant is that? Using pee as hot water bottles! It's good those bags were leakproof! Your nursing expertise really comes through in this book on survival. I hope Daniel and Gray get there soon!
Comment Written 12-May-2021
reply by the author on 13-May-2021
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your great comments Helen. Lol, yes it does come from my nursing but I also saw it on The Big Bang show. Hugs!
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That's a funny show. I'm glad it inspired you!
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LOL, even with the show ending last year, Jim and I still watch the reruns, there is always something interesting. hugs.
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They developed those characters very well! 😊
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SMILE
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a good idea! I'd never have thought of peeing into a bag and using it's warmth to stop myself from freezing to death! I'll remember that ... just in case! Well, Daniel must be getting closer. I'll go and find out! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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What a good idea! I'd never have thought of peeing into a bag and using it's warmth to stop myself from freezing to death! I'll remember that ... just in case! Well, Daniel must be getting closer. I'll go and find out! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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I actually learned that from some of the tribal kids or rather one of the fathers taught us that on our girl scout camp over. It works for a little while, just don't break one. Thanks again Sandra.
Comment from BeasPeas
Such a good story, Alie. Very enjoyable. I like all the nuances and detail you apply to the theme. Wonderful job and I'm looking forward to more of it. I did find two small typos:
"Don't give into (in to) the cold"
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"She placed the bags of water closed (close) to the rock ring"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Such a good story, Alie. Very enjoyable. I like all the nuances and detail you apply to the theme. Wonderful job and I'm looking forward to more of it. I did find two small typos:
"Don't give into (in to) the cold"
and
"She placed the bags of water closed (close) to the rock ring"
Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Wow, thank you so much Marilyn for the six stars and your great comments. I am also very appreciative of you catching those typos, they will be fixed in a few moments.
Comment from Pantygynt
I reviewed this the wrong way round sitll never mind, my brain has sorted them into the correct order now. The only query I had is now answered (the urine) and we know that this part of the tale has a happy outcome. Daniel will get there in time.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I reviewed this the wrong way round sitll never mind, my brain has sorted them into the correct order now. The only query I had is now answered (the urine) and we know that this part of the tale has a happy outcome. Daniel will get there in time.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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LOL yep he becomes the hero, but its not over yet. Thank you for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate your comments and observations. You provide honest and detailed information.
Comment from Zue65
Wow, this is quite intense Rachel on the verge of freezing death while Daniel is racing following the trail of Gray. The post ended with a subtle clue that will predict the content of the next post, I suppose. I will wait of course for the next post. Weel done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Wow, this is quite intense Rachel on the verge of freezing death while Daniel is racing following the trail of Gray. The post ended with a subtle clue that will predict the content of the next post, I suppose. I will wait of course for the next post. Weel done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing, I am glad that it is keeping your interest. Thank you for your kind comments.
Comment from MelB
She had snuggled into the leaves for warm, but at this point nothing seemed to help - warm(th)
What a brilliant idea to put the urine in the bags. I don't know if I would have thought of it. An enjoyable chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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She had snuggled into the leaves for warm, but at this point nothing seemed to help - warm(th)
What a brilliant idea to put the urine in the bags. I don't know if I would have thought of it. An enjoyable chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thanks for reviewing Mel, I will make that correction in a few minutes, thanks for catching it. I like being creative when I can. Thanks again for reading and enjoying.
