Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Fun and instructive. I might be able to do this. You list all the things needed to make the jellyfish. This activity might help students get a better idea of what a jellyfish looks like. Excellent rhyme and very optimistic tone. You make it sound like a fun and easy project. judi

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 26-Mar-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I am ROTF and LOL! You are too much. Clever and cute. Your conversational tone to your reader is perfect. Last stanza is particularly entertaining. Marilyn

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very cute and well written poem about how to make a jellyfish. You used very good sound instructions and very cute imagery with the art work. This might be something fun to do with Greyson. Great job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Tat is what friends are for, They keep you from developing a false sense of pride. When they beat you down and you survive, you learn the lesson that you are tough enough to take a beating and keep on going. You don't want friends who keep you soft and unprepared for failure.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, nomi.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Thank you for the craft how-to poem, Bill! Well, next time the grand kids are up this way, I'll have to get them involved and then take their masterpieces home.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Careful with scissors.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Have you made one yet? It looks like a fun craft for children.

A very creative idea and instructions given in a poem. 8-)

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, da. I think I made a spider this way.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This picture is even nicer than the previous ones. It complements your poem perfectly. Your poem rhymes and flows all the way. Thanks for sharing it. Can't wait to see the next ones.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Ine

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

FUN READ... very clever poem. I smiled the whole way to the end of the verse. I have no criticism at all. It was a joy to read and I can't wait for more fun to follow. thanks yours diana

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Diana

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahaha, Bill, you do make me laugh. Wonderful jelly fish made with a little imagination. Something very good to pass on to my granddaughters. They'll love it. Another great poem you have composed yet again. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Ulla. Be careful with scissors.

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

Aren't you glad your friends are always honest with you? Frankly, I think your crappy jellyfish are cute, and I know a few kids who'd love to make them and hang them in their rooms. :)

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Brenda.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 26-Mar-2018

You're welcome, Bill.