Who is it?
Fight or flight are her only choices.7 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
How did I miss this one? It was as if they were playing the children's game. If I close my eyes tight enough & long enough I'll be invisible. You created the sense of suspense just right. What a nice ending. Sometimes those Karmic things do happen. Once again you write with a realistic tone. The behaviors all have good follow-through. You characters all stay consistent to their role. Well written.
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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How did I miss this one? It was as if they were playing the children's game. If I close my eyes tight enough & long enough I'll be invisible. You created the sense of suspense just right. What a nice ending. Sometimes those Karmic things do happen. Once again you write with a realistic tone. The behaviors all have good follow-through. You characters all stay consistent to their role. Well written.
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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I am so glad you caught up with my stories. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from frogbook
This was a great story-well written and one could feel the fear. It was palpable. Excellent story progression and background and I, for on, was glad Joe was gone!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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This was a great story-well written and one could feel the fear. It was palpable. Excellent story progression and background and I, for on, was glad Joe was gone!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thank you so very much for the 6 stars. I am thrilled. I'm afraid this story is way too common.
Comment from Katya
This is wonderful! A great evocation of the circumstances and state of mind of an abused woman and child. I was cringing the whole time the knocking and pounding were going on. Good job!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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This is wonderful! A great evocation of the circumstances and state of mind of an abused woman and child. I was cringing the whole time the knocking and pounding were going on. Good job!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments and the stars.
Comment from cailinraine8
Perfect ending to a sad and all too common place story.... having gone through domestic abuse myself I know how damaging and horrifying it is. Those who get out and escape to freedom are the lucky ones, but the scars remain always. You have my vote for the contest. Thank you.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Perfect ending to a sad and all too common place story.... having gone through domestic abuse myself I know how damaging and horrifying it is. Those who get out and escape to freedom are the lucky ones, but the scars remain always. You have my vote for the contest. Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I know the scars and scares of always wondering when he will find you. My house was a safe place for my friend and her children. They have all come so far from that dark time. (hug) for bravery and surviving.
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thank you ... hugs back! :)
Comment from Swampfox1
Very well written, plus the layout and the scheme are superb. I like the way that it's the cop that shows up at the back door and how he helps the woman and her daughter. It is even more brilliant how the husband dies at the cause of a drunk driver and then the woman marries the cop. Great storyline. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Very well written, plus the layout and the scheme are superb. I like the way that it's the cop that shows up at the back door and how he helps the woman and her daughter. It is even more brilliant how the husband dies at the cause of a drunk driver and then the woman marries the cop. Great storyline. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the comments and stars. I always appreciate them.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Sentence writing prompt.
Your story of a mothers fear is well told and it had a lovely ending.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Sentence writing prompt.
Your story of a mothers fear is well told and it had a lovely ending.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thanks as always, Sharon
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a story about violence, death but author raises a question in course of accident on way; that who it was; somebody or something invisible; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This speaks a story about violence, death but author raises a question in course of accident on way; that who it was; somebody or something invisible; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your comments and stars. I appreciate both.
