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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "Woman: Bone Of My Bones."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Yes indeed where all life derived from in the Garden and I do hink from reading this piece I know who it is but I won't say anyway very good came right out of the word and it's always dealing with the issues of life when you come from the word of God. And the picture was very mystical but I love it but the wording was so powerful thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2018

Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello author
Like your scripture reading of what Adam said about the meaning of life,
and your rhyming poem about the need of your wife in your life
Best to you in this contest
Gert

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2018

Comment from lyenochka
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Such a lovely tribute to your wife and that you recognize she was the "bone of your bones" just as the passage in Genesis says. May the Lord heal your relationship.
One comment:
"But will mercy on me, I beg of you please." ("will" sounds odd to me. Usually, we say, "have mercy on me." )

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018

Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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God is love, for sure! Thank you for your inspirational poem. My mother was a powerful Christain and I miss her so much. What a blessing to read your message (God's message). Good luck with the contest. If you enjoy inspirational stories, I wrote a book about my mom/dad: Eulogies Unspoken: Stories of Worth. I would be so honored if you were willing to read it.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks true meaning of life, first put God first in life; find the kingdom of God and His Righteousness; Commandments referred to; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018