Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

I am not entirely sure, beyond it appears, that a littler of cats were born and Cory is stolen away, what Annie is telling us. At least I am honest. The story has a flair and in way a rhythm of its own. Perhaps, I am reading to in depth or not enough. :) Sherman541

"I just want you to late with them a moment, I got to go outside and take care of my business!" (did you mean lay versus late?)

Now got back to sleep.. (did you mean go versus got?)

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

thanks Yurman incorrect part 2 is actually activated right now the kidnapping thanks dr. Ricky 1024

reply by Sherman541 on 24-Mar-2018

You are welcome, I guess I missed part one, will keep my eyes open and hopefully figure out the next one. Thank you

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, a great story within the lines of your poem. It would have broad appeal, I imagine. I enjoyed it, and have no suggestions for improvement, thanks for sharin your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

thanks Anastasia and part 2 to the catnapping is actually activated right now talk to Ricky 1024 and have a blessed day

Comment from karenina

Excellent

I feel like I missed six episodes of my favorite season.... Or maybe the whole thing is far above my head! I cannot fault your writing and your exuberance is clear, hence the five stars....but I need Cliff's notes or a summary or perhaps an extensive prologue.... It's fun, but beyond me....

Karenina

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks and part 2 the kidnapping is actually activated right now talk to Ricky 1024

reply by karenina on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks for the heads up!--Karenina

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

reply by karenina on 24-Mar-2018

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

An excellent and utmost unusual photo that complements your poem very well. I honestly could not guess what you are writing about. Can be me or do you have to look at it a bit more critically.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

hi Robin my cat Clementine gave birth for the second time instead of four to five kittens and I'm holding one of them actually and the story is of course fictional but it is about the catnapping of Corey the five kittens are all named after my children thanks in part 2 is now activated dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the children's fairy tale, a nice tale of transformation is retold with wonders and amazement;well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks for your time and review part 2 the cat napping is activated now and have a blessed day dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from apky

Excellent

I really had a great chuckling session with this one, Doc. And I loved the photograph - what a great looking man! - eventhough I had to lift my laptop and hold up left-side-up in order to admire the photo´properly.

Real belly laughs on these lines below:

"Well, it looks like we got rid of him dear!"
"Yes Rose."
"Now got back to sleep... _ you need to change "got" to "go"
"While Rose was sleeping...
"Mr.Grey was a creeping?"
"The next morning...
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"Meow!!!"
"What dear?"
I wondered?
"A babies gone and It's Corey!" I think you meant a sing "baby" and not "babies"?
Rose cried out!"

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

i a p k y thanks for the wonderful review and also the wonderful compliment the catnapping part 2 is activated now have a blessed day dr. Ricky 1024 and it's snowing or it has snowed here in South Jersey