My Brothers' Keeper
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Gray."Rachel feels responsible for her brother.
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, there is another human nearby. Gray will somehow need to communicate to Daniel that he needs to meet Rachel. I'm wondering how Daniel ended up as a caveman and not living with other people. I guess more mystery will unravel soon.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Oh, there is another human nearby. Gray will somehow need to communicate to Daniel that he needs to meet Rachel. I'm wondering how Daniel ended up as a caveman and not living with other people. I guess more mystery will unravel soon.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2021
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Surprises are yet to come Helen, lol.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Sorry Alie, Catch-up time! This was good, now we know where Gray came from, and why he is so tame. I've got a treat in store catching up all at the same time. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Sorry Alie, Catch-up time! This was good, now we know where Gray came from, and why he is so tame. I've got a treat in store catching up all at the same time. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Okay, starting with this one first lol. Hey you don't have to apologize, I am sure you get side tracked with events of life. Thank you so much for your kind comments, smiles. Yepper, Gray is tame for sure. I actually based him on a wolf pup my childhood friend found and raised. He was about 30 years old when he died. I was lucky enough to be around him enough that he accepted me as part of his pack/ family. Thanks for reading Sandra.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alie. I love this chapter which is written so well. In it, we meet Gray's friend, Daniel, who rescued him as a pup. Heartwarming and well described. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hi Alie. I love this chapter which is written so well. In it, we meet Gray's friend, Daniel, who rescued him as a pup. Heartwarming and well described. I enjoyed reading this. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Once again Marilyn thank you for reviewing, I am so glad you are enjoying it. I really appreciate you encouraging comments.
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Hi Alie. It seems you went through a long period of reviewing and not writing. You're a good writer. I hope you continue to post. Marilyn
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LOL Marilyn, I go through spurts, one just never knows.
Comment from Pantygynt
Of course the big question now is how will he get the message across to his friend, perhaps the way will come to him as he gnaws at his dinnere. First things first though his own hunger must be satisfied then i reckon hwill nudge and whine and go and come back a few time until the man picks up on the idea that Grey is trying to tell him something.
A great little episode this to introduce new characters into the story.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Of course the big question now is how will he get the message across to his friend, perhaps the way will come to him as he gnaws at his dinnere. First things first though his own hunger must be satisfied then i reckon hwill nudge and whine and go and come back a few time until the man picks up on the idea that Grey is trying to tell him something.
A great little episode this to introduce new characters into the story.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Awww thank you for reviewing and for your great suggestions, I promised you will find out in the next chapter lol. I am glad you are enjoying it.
Comment from Wetbelly01
Neat story, so far...
Just saw one 'glitch'... "Daniel had place(d) a piece"...
Otherwise I didn't come across any others...
My compliments, well done as far as I'm concerned!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Neat story, so far...
Just saw one 'glitch'... "Daniel had place(d) a piece"...
Otherwise I didn't come across any others...
My compliments, well done as far as I'm concerned!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reviewing and catching that 'glitch', I will correct it momentarily. I really appreciate your comments.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks in continuation, Daniel and his uncle George found him, Grey needed milk and meat, Grey's life started with; Grey's introduction was formal; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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This speaks in continuation, Daniel and his uncle George found him, Grey needed milk and meat, Grey's life started with; Grey's introduction was formal; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing. I appreciate your constructive comments and I am glad you found it enjoyable.
