Haiku and Senryu Suites
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "More Synch~"Book of Haiku, Senryu & Lanturne Suites
5 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
Right up there on another plane, some will read and move on, some will read and mistake your meaning, some will read and glean some reassurance, and few will read, understand, and further, see a little way into the intellect that created this illustration.
irish
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Right up there on another plane, some will read and move on, some will read and mistake your meaning, some will read and glean some reassurance, and few will read, understand, and further, see a little way into the intellect that created this illustration.
irish
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank-you so much for your perspective, it is really appreciated. BB
Comment from Bucketlist
Hi Darren, I like your philosophy. Synchrinosity is so important for many things. I'm thinking of relationships and how it gets us on the 'same page' or leads to discourse and arguments if it's absent. A great reminder, I enjoyed reading you again. Thanks for sharing.
Hug, Trisha
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Hi Darren, I like your philosophy. Synchrinosity is so important for many things. I'm thinking of relationships and how it gets us on the 'same page' or leads to discourse and arguments if it's absent. A great reminder, I enjoyed reading you again. Thanks for sharing.
Hug, Trisha
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thanks again for your input, you help shed some light on the hidden meanings
Blessings.
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You are welcome. Would you please critique my poem ?Imagination?? I am NOT asking for a contest vote, but I would like to get recognized (need one more review) thanks!
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You are welcome. Would you please critique my poem ?Imagination?? I am NOT asking for a contest vote, but I would like to get recognized (need one more review) thanks!
Comment from lyenochka
Hi Darren! Good to see you post again. I like how your suite of 5-7-5 poems are threaded together like a loop poem tied by a common theme. It's a beautiful thing when different minds can unite and understand each other.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Hi Darren! Good to see you post again. I like how your suite of 5-7-5 poems are threaded together like a loop poem tied by a common theme. It's a beautiful thing when different minds can unite and understand each other.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thanks so nice to hear from you and get your kind review. I'm pleased that you saw the common threaten them and that you pointed it out of your review. I pleasure and they're not her to write with you care, blessings,
Darren
Comment from Debbie Pope
Well, Brother Badger, what we need in this world is not love so much as it is synchronicity. Even if we cannot agree on a solution, it would be so helpful if everyone could at least see all the possibilities. If everyone at least tried to understand the problem, fully enlightened, progress could be made. We need truth seeker, like you say. Unfortunately, I think most people are not wired to be truth seekers. That is the problem. Sorry for all this rambling. Maybe it is helpful for you to see where your words sent my mind. Most poems don't send me rambling like this. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Well, Brother Badger, what we need in this world is not love so much as it is synchronicity. Even if we cannot agree on a solution, it would be so helpful if everyone could at least see all the possibilities. If everyone at least tried to understand the problem, fully enlightened, progress could be made. We need truth seeker, like you say. Unfortunately, I think most people are not wired to be truth seekers. That is the problem. Sorry for all this rambling. Maybe it is helpful for you to see where your words sent my mind. Most poems don't send me rambling like this. Good job.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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No don't apologize, I truly like that you're a moment of it because it's a free form brainstorm I love how you felt.. True expression of how my haiku
Suite affected you, I am honored by your review and the words you chose.
Please feel free to ramble anytime you are reviewing my writing.
Blessings
Brother Badger
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the synchronicity the state of conceptually understanding that they felt enlightened with eager to understand more; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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This speaks about the synchronicity the state of conceptually understanding that they felt enlightened with eager to understand more; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Your words are like sweet raindrops dropping on a parched tounge, filling ME
with enlightening time you helping me understand that you truly seat the deeper meaning behind my house this week, as you always done as you always do. I truly enjoy your juice, there Candice to the point and a bit mysterious like my writing. Blessings, Brother Badger.
