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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Wind on Wind"contemporary poetry
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Comment from cailinraine8
I think perhaps we all seek this kind of freedom... aren't we kept in humdrum mode when our clocks and schedules rule, our responsibilities can weigh heavy... we just want to be free like the birds to soar... inside our spirits are free inside belief, faith, hope and love... thank goodness a way can be found!
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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I think perhaps we all seek this kind of freedom... aren't we kept in humdrum mode when our clocks and schedules rule, our responsibilities can weigh heavy... we just want to be free like the birds to soar... inside our spirits are free inside belief, faith, hope and love... thank goodness a way can be found!
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for the excellent review and for all your comments supporting this poem. I am so glad it resonated so well for you, and you were carried away like those balloons in the words. It makes me think the work that went into it, paid off. thanks again I appreciate the support....estory
