Comment from jppoet

Exceptional

This is an adorable and imaginative poem, sculpted in rich rhymes and harmonious metrical cadences. Am also bookcasing it. BRAVO, john

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

Comment from Beck Fenton

Exceptional

This is a wonderful poem with a flow that reminds me of Lewis Carroll's Alice in Wonderland. I love the pictures you've drawn for the reader. It's probably the winner. Darn it. Grin. Good luck with it.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Thank you for your terrific, encouraging review, and stunning six stars, Beck!!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a great motivation to children for writing rhyme as exemplified with this tale about a land that never existed, in commendable rhymes; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. It is the third one I have seen. Reviewing entries for this contest is delightful. Your poem is no exception. Here is my favorite part. "Worm to face mongoose thinking rat,
drop of hat-trap to see an opponent, becoming prey the hunter who sat.". I am assuming the worm is actually a snake because mongooses kill cobras. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018

Hmm....Cobras, worms and mongeese?
My piece has none of those beasts.
I'm glad that you liked the poem you read,
but Pam, you must have just gotten out of bed.
Mention monkeys, unicorns and octopi,
And then you'll be talking to the right guy..
Somehow you mixed up another poem with mine.
Perhaps you should return to the scene of the crime.
the page where you found the poem you addressed
and strayed in some way to one from another contest.
Or, as it's not important, confess you couldn't care less.

In that case, my mistake; I thought you'd want to know.





Take another look, and do your best
To see if your re-view reveals how you reviewed in the wrong contest.

reply by Pamusart on 20-Mar-2018

Lol. I know what happened. I was reviewing a crazy post that had a worm and a mongoose. I went to look at the suthor?s profile and other posts and then went back on my browser until I got back to the post. It must have taken me back to the wrong post. I enjoyed yours very much. It flowed easily was well rhymed and was the perfect entry for the contest

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Kiddies Motivational Poem writing prompt.
Your story of your invented land with the funny animals is cute.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018