Comment from karenina

Excellent

I know I moan about the short forms....(I'm not used to them in my defense!)---

HOWEVER...

I have to say this one just tickled my fancy...
(I will be late for my own funeral according to my parents)

The illustration chosen is perfection!

I'm probably about five years late, so take your time!

Karenina

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks, Karenina, for giving this a look. Bill

reply by karenina on 20-Mar-2018

It was a chuckle! Karenina

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. The poem starts out with a sense of missing a time-related event which is supported by the second line. But the last line gives us a completely different and humorous perspective.

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks for the timely response.