Imagination
Poetry free verse19 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks in dreams she comes and loves him all the way in all activities of living and he imagines it would be part of the reality; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This speaks in dreams she comes and loves him all the way in all activities of living and he imagines it would be part of the reality; well written, well done; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dreaming of lover
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about our imagination that can take us anywhere we like to go at any time without physically traveling anywhere. Who knows, an imagined dream may just come true.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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A very well-written free verse poem about our imagination that can take us anywhere we like to go at any time without physically traveling anywhere. Who knows, an imagined dream may just come true.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I hope so! Thanks again, I appreciate you reviewing so kindly.
Comment from Artasylum
well there is so much right and special about this... The female form made from your seductive words coming to it's proper climax. The artwork is stunning. everything is right about this. Good luck in the contest. yours, diana
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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well there is so much right and special about this... The female form made from your seductive words coming to it's proper climax. The artwork is stunning. everything is right about this. Good luck in the contest. yours, diana
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a great review, Diana! I really appreciate it. I get encouraged from reviews like yours.
Have a super Sunday,
Trisha
Comment from Henry King
Very erotic poem. It flows well with a good rhythm. The words send the message clearly. The metaphor and simile are used perfectly. There is enough internal and end rhyme to make the piece musical when said aloud.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Very erotic poem. It flows well with a good rhythm. The words send the message clearly. The metaphor and simile are used perfectly. There is enough internal and end rhyme to make the piece musical when said aloud.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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? to make the piece musical when said aloud? wow! That?s the highest compliment I?ve got. Thank you so much for your terrific review, Henry
Trisha
Comment from Badger_29
Very well constructed with good word choice, powerful theme, and a nice cadence. I loved the way you from one idea to the next, with a comfortably irregular rhyme scheme.
Tell me words
That will melt
My frozen heart
I imagine this to be
Reality's part
I really like the ending
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Very well constructed with good word choice, powerful theme, and a nice cadence. I loved the way you from one idea to the next, with a comfortably irregular rhyme scheme.
Tell me words
That will melt
My frozen heart
I imagine this to be
Reality's part
I really like the ending
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you for a wonderful review! It made my day. The six stars were an additional honor. I?m so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Hug, Trisha
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Very passionate! You've done the "sexy-vibe" with a tastefulness. Nicely chosen poem for the "I imagine" contest. Good luck. I especially liked the line, "validate the real me."
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Very passionate! You've done the "sexy-vibe" with a tastefulness. Nicely chosen poem for the "I imagine" contest. Good luck. I especially liked the line, "validate the real me."
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much, Cindy
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Beautiful imagining, Bucketlist. A strong entry for this competition, and best of luck with this sensual free verse. It flowed and was lovely to read. I have no suggestions for making it better, you've done a great job and the picture is superb. Nothing to fix, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Beautiful imagining, Bucketlist. A strong entry for this competition, and best of luck with this sensual free verse. It flowed and was lovely to read. I have no suggestions for making it better, you've done a great job and the picture is superb. Nothing to fix, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I appreciate your complimentary review
Comment from cailinraine8
This is a unique and lovely poem.... much to imagine within these words and they might mean something different to each reader... yes it is nice to dream! The picture is divine!... likely the prettiest one I have seen on here yet!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This is a unique and lovely poem.... much to imagine within these words and they might mean something different to each reader... yes it is nice to dream! The picture is divine!... likely the prettiest one I have seen on here yet!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thanks very much
Comment from tony bronk
a very good free verse. I enjoyed the allure of the tone as it went along telling of your wishful lover, soul mate as you see it! Excellent poem! Tony
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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a very good free verse. I enjoyed the allure of the tone as it went along telling of your wishful lover, soul mate as you see it! Excellent poem! Tony
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you so very much Tony ,I?m glad it had ?allure?
Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha;
This was slightly erotic. However, even in our older years, we can still imagine the budding promise of new love. It seems that is a part of our lives we will never forget. Well done.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Hi, Trisha;
This was slightly erotic. However, even in our older years, we can still imagine the budding promise of new love. It seems that is a part of our lives we will never forget. Well done.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Love is a validation of another person., not just for sexual reasons. Thanks so much for your review
