Feeding Time
Parenthood9 total reviews
Comment from angel123
Your artwork choice aids you in creating a clever poem about parenthood and the priceless moments of raising children. It flows well and I like the rhyme of smile and style.
Best wishes!
angel123
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Your artwork choice aids you in creating a clever poem about parenthood and the priceless moments of raising children. It flows well and I like the rhyme of smile and style.
Best wishes!
angel123
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Haha ... this is a really cute entry for the Short Poem contest. The best one that I've read so far. Babies and toddlers ... one never knows what they're going to do. :)
Good luck in the contest with this excellent entry! ~~ bichonfrisegirl
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Haha ... this is a really cute entry for the Short Poem contest. The best one that I've read so far. Babies and toddlers ... one never knows what they're going to do. :)
Good luck in the contest with this excellent entry! ~~ bichonfrisegirl
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Short Poem writing prompt.
Your story of the feeding time disaster is clear in the short verse.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Short Poem writing prompt.
Your story of the feeding time disaster is clear in the short verse.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious! Such innocence, you brought back some memories and the mess I used to clear up daily! Oh to bring those happy days back! I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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This is hilarious! Such innocence, you brought back some memories and the mess I used to clear up daily! Oh to bring those happy days back! I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting poem challenge that you've succeeded with. The words, without the image, are still very effective and can evoke many situations. The pairing makes this a cute poem likely to evoke many smiles in your readers. The idea/story is complete.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Interesting poem challenge that you've succeeded with. The words, without the image, are still very effective and can evoke many situations. The pairing makes this a cute poem likely to evoke many smiles in your readers. The idea/story is complete.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Pamusart
So, if I interpret this correctly, your baby is looking at your face and as soon as you turn your back, the baby gets naughty. Solution? Mirrors. Lol. Have you ever seen any of those guilty dog videos? Some are pretty funny. Good luck in the contest. Thank you fir sharing
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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So, if I interpret this correctly, your baby is looking at your face and as soon as you turn your back, the baby gets naughty. Solution? Mirrors. Lol. Have you ever seen any of those guilty dog videos? Some are pretty funny. Good luck in the contest. Thank you fir sharing
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much, your lol made me laugh. Laughter is the best medicine. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
A well written fifteen word compliant short poem writing prompt that reminisces the mood swings of mothers while their babies reject and accept food.
The work earns its texture through the use of irony and imagery.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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A well written fifteen word compliant short poem writing prompt that reminisces the mood swings of mothers while their babies reject and accept food.
The work earns its texture through the use of irony and imagery.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for you review.
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written short poem you have penned for the contest. You used very cute words and very cute imagery with the picture of the little girl in her food. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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This is a very well written short poem you have penned for the contest. You used very cute words and very cute imagery with the picture of the little girl in her food. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much, your review made my day.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
I think this is a sweet gesture put in so few words. Check out the poem contest for 7 words that required a a ryhme scheme. There's one entitled to be like a
Jesus. Pretty good for 7 words. But back to your poem, you're either a proud grandma or a mama reflecting on a special moment. Either one I love it and the picture is the icing on the cake.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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I think this is a sweet gesture put in so few words. Check out the poem contest for 7 words that required a a ryhme scheme. There's one entitled to be like a
Jesus. Pretty good for 7 words. But back to your poem, you're either a proud grandma or a mama reflecting on a special moment. Either one I love it and the picture is the icing on the cake.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Just someone who loves kids and babysitting, thanks so much for your review.
