Reviews from

Worlds

Viewing comments for Chapter 187 "Shrew World 9"
Animal poetry and short stories

17 total reviews 
Comment from frogbook
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I must say that is the most closeup view of a shrew, I have had the opportunity to see and it is illustrative of your words about being a hungry little monster.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    He?s a cutie.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Oh my goodness!
What a fun limerick, Bill. I love the play on words at its ending. Can't say that I have the same affinity for shrews that you do, but I can co-exist with them. I prepared stew this weekend for my husband, and well, he should meet your shrew: it's almost all gone!
Love the humor: we need more of it!

diane

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Diane
Comment from Spitfire
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A near play on words that works: shrew heard as through. The rhythm of your limerick is perfect. Nice use of consonance with eat, pit, and quit.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Shari, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Gotta' watch out for those greedy fat cats of the world, they eat and eat until there is nothing left. They then sleep until it is time for the next meal. Woe unto anybody or anything that resembles their edible food, for you will be consumed.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    They eat 90% of their body weight daily.
Comment from Teri7
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a very cute limerick about the little shrew. You used very cute words and a cute picture of the shrew. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Teri.
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Lol. Do shrews have that great an appetite? I think of them as such little creatures. Very well done limerick appropriate for St. Patrick's Day and still keeping up your shrew theme!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    The heart of a shrew beats 800 times a minute, considerably faster than that of the hummingbird. Shrews must eat 80-90 % of their own body weight in food daily. Most will starve to death if deprived of food for half a day. Web source:Quara.com
Comment from robina1978
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

An excellent photo of this shrew, that complements your poem very well. I think I saw them on television very recently. They look nice, and eat all the way every day-from morn till night. If they would not do this they'd starve.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Ine, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from damommy
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

LOL. You should have entered this in the limerick contest.

If he's not careful, he'll outgrow his nest. I like the play on words.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, da, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Very sneaky and effective rhyme scheme. I love it Bill and thanks for being a fan its an honor. So from reading both 9 & 10 is it safe to assume that there are 8 more? I love the little humor bites. It seems that little rident was greedy and never had enough to eat. Great little story.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Mary, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a clever Limerick about your beloved shrews, eat and not quit! That's rodents for you, they have eaten through the telephone lines in my street and cut everybody off! No joke! Great work, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Dolly, for giving this a look. Bill