~ Whispers ~
3 Line Poem ... 5-7-518 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PoemsOfDD
I pray and hope you did well in this contest.
I can see why your picture and 3 line poem of feathered seeds blowing in the wind
I've heard it told that the number of breaths taken to blow all the seeds off a puffball is equal to the number of years before true love comes into your life.
Gert
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Hello PoemsOfDD
I pray and hope you did well in this contest.
I can see why your picture and 3 line poem of feathered seeds blowing in the wind
I've heard it told that the number of breaths taken to blow all the seeds off a puffball is equal to the number of years before true love comes into your life.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Thank you Gert for your supportive and thoughtful review on my short poem. Alas, it did nor fair well in the competition ...??twas not written in the wind. ~DD
Comment from karenina
Everything to like here, photo to hopeful heart. Some of the best poems whisper, not shout. I felt the import of this, someone's heart depends on it....
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Everything to like here, photo to hopeful heart. Some of the best poems whisper, not shout. I felt the import of this, someone's heart depends on it....
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thank you karenina for popping in and leaving a thoughtful review. It is much appreciated. ~DD
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I enjoyed popping in, as you put it!--Karenina
Comment from Rubylou
Hello DD,
Your short poem left me with the feeling of suspicion as to what the lover truly has on their mind.
Your last line, "force me to wonder", sounds so open to doubt and of course, wondering...
Rubylou
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello DD,
Your short poem left me with the feeling of suspicion as to what the lover truly has on their mind.
Your last line, "force me to wonder", sounds so open to doubt and of course, wondering...
Rubylou
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you Rubylou for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are always encouraging and very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
A wonderful three line poem. Whispering on the wind may give a hint of love, but will the whimsical wind also take it away? --"whispers on the wind force me to wonder." Time is the test. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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A wonderful three line poem. Whispering on the wind may give a hint of love, but will the whimsical wind also take it away? --"whispers on the wind force me to wonder." Time is the test. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you Marilyn, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are always encouraging and very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Powerful poem.
Powerful whispers.
Funny how that happens, isn't?
Your three line poem alludes to betrayal, unfaithfulness, or...is the person speaking causing trouble? I love a poem that is open to many interpretatins!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hello!
Powerful poem.
Powerful whispers.
Funny how that happens, isn't?
Your three line poem alludes to betrayal, unfaithfulness, or...is the person speaking causing trouble? I love a poem that is open to many interpretatins!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Diane, thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from donette1914
very cleaver of whispers that are carried by the wind, it does wonder if love is for real. I love the a artwork and I felt you did a very good job and i hope for the best in the contest written by donette1914 on march 18th 2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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very cleaver of whispers that are carried by the wind, it does wonder if love is for real. I love the a artwork and I felt you did a very good job and i hope for the best in the contest written by donette1914 on march 18th 2018
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thank you Donette. Your comments on my short poem are very much appreciated. ~DD
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello DD,
I can feel that a little bit of whispering went through the grapevine for the person in the poem to have heard about some activities that might indicate a little,bit of cheating was going on? Makes me think of that Sam Smith song where he sings, "I know you don't know I know what you've done", and, "when you call me baby, I know I'm not the only one".
This little poem has a lot going on in between the words. Excellent imagery. Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Hello DD,
I can feel that a little bit of whispering went through the grapevine for the person in the poem to have heard about some activities that might indicate a little,bit of cheating was going on? Makes me think of that Sam Smith song where he sings, "I know you don't know I know what you've done", and, "when you call me baby, I know I'm not the only one".
This little poem has a lot going on in between the words. Excellent imagery. Best wishes in this contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you Joy. I appreciate your insightful comments on my 5-7-5 poem. I?ll have to have a listen to Sam Smith so thanks for the comparison. ~ DD
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful use of imagery here. The first line expresses the narrator's questioning the lover's authenticity. Then we understand the reason for the questions. It's rumors, like weed seeds that are distributing doubt in the heart. Well done!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Wonderful use of imagery here. The first line expresses the narrator's questioning the lover's authenticity. Then we understand the reason for the questions. It's rumors, like weed seeds that are distributing doubt in the heart. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate the time taken to review my 5-7-5. Your comments are always appreciated. ~DD
Comment from JennaG
This is a great entry for the 3 Line poem contest, DD! Your syllable count is perfect and I love all the "w" alliteration. I think "whispers" is an excellent word choice to convey the message about doubt in a relationship. Very skillfully written! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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This is a great entry for the 3 Line poem contest, DD! Your syllable count is perfect and I love all the "w" alliteration. I think "whispers" is an excellent word choice to convey the message about doubt in a relationship. Very skillfully written! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks Jenna. I much appreciate your supportive comments on my 5-7-5 poem and contest wishes. Kind regards ~DD
Comment from Pantygynt
A portrayal of the nagging doubt that can affect personal relationships. Only time will tell whether this relationship will stand its tests. And time, as we know is carried on the wind as the seeds of the dandelion clock. A very effective three liner.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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A portrayal of the nagging doubt that can affect personal relationships. Only time will tell whether this relationship will stand its tests. And time, as we know is carried on the wind as the seeds of the dandelion clock. A very effective three liner.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Pantygynt, thank you for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are always encouraging and very much appreciated. ~DD
