Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

I Like your little poem here...
Sounds so familiar in a lot of ways...
Didn't come across any problems along the way...
My compliments!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018

Thank you WB, it's autobiographical, LOL. Some older kids came by and saved me but NOT before I threw down a bunch of apples.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I love this. Is it autobiographical? Ha! Totally an enjoyable read. At age 5, I fell from an apple tree. I could have entered my story in the scars competition for I still have one. Your story is light hearted as are children. Very well done. I like your ending.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for your kind words and, yes, I was up that tree without a potty. LOL some older kids came by and saved me but ONLY after I picked some apples and threw them down.

Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

Good flow to your rhymes and humor to boot! What is done is done, why bother hurrying down then, right?! Did you get a belly ache from those sour apples? Good poem. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018

All summer!!! The older kids came and saved me but only after I picked more apples. Thank you for you kind review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A happy and uplifting write about our lovely apple trees and I am looking forward to english apples in the shops this summer, a delightful poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018

Loved those green, sour apples (usually had a salt shaker) and I too am looking forward to fresh apples! Thank you for your kind words.