My promise
I made a committment I want to share21 total reviews
Comment from Tootie
What a beautiful declaration! Blessed are those that come to this point and give up trying to be their own gods and control it all within their human minds. I believe that is the only sin (devil in disguise). And once we "let go" finally, the sin is washed away. Take it day by day--you'll see the signs and be assured. And know that Christ is in you and is you. God - I AM-ALL THAT IS! Thank you for sharing your commitment here with all of us. Hooray! And God Bless! - Cathy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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What a beautiful declaration! Blessed are those that come to this point and give up trying to be their own gods and control it all within their human minds. I believe that is the only sin (devil in disguise). And once we "let go" finally, the sin is washed away. Take it day by day--you'll see the signs and be assured. And know that Christ is in you and is you. God - I AM-ALL THAT IS! Thank you for sharing your commitment here with all of us. Hooray! And God Bless! - Cathy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Well God Bless you too Tootie! And thanks so much for the wonderful and uplifting review and stars! So joyful to meet you and hoping to see you often! Blessings always! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from LindaCorby
The intent of the poem is there but there are errors that make this poem hard to read and the flow is choppy.
Unfortunately cannot give higher due to fact the meanin gets lost during the read.
I like the meaning
Thanks for the share
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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The intent of the poem is there but there are errors that make this poem hard to read and the flow is choppy.
Unfortunately cannot give higher due to fact the meanin gets lost during the read.
I like the meaning
Thanks for the share
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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Sorry you did not like my work Linda and please take me off you review list in the future! Thanks HIS GRAYNESS
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Vance. Bravo! I'm with you on this one. Commitment, dedication to be all that's possible through Him who gives it to us. Your poem has the mark of joy, excitement, and exhilaration. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Hi Vance. Bravo! I'm with you on this one. Commitment, dedication to be all that's possible through Him who gives it to us. Your poem has the mark of joy, excitement, and exhilaration. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thanks again Marilyn for your wonderful review and always uplifting words. i have said a prayer for you and your friend and hope all works out well for you and your loved ones always! Vance
Comment from Bucketlist
It's strange to think we glean love from virtuality. I admire you for your faith, and also your private pledge to God,in a public arena.
Hope you will be able to share your written love for a long time
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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It's strange to think we glean love from virtuality. I admire you for your faith, and also your private pledge to God,in a public arena.
Hope you will be able to share your written love for a long time
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you sincerely Trisha, for your lovely review and generous stars! At my age and doing just great with five years into the deadly Alzheimer's disease, God has made HIS presence very clear in my life, so I decided to make my presence in HIS just as clear as this teamwork certainly is working well and I trust it fully. The most I can do in the way of thanks, is to share this story with others who may also have serious problems and perhaps don't have the faith to take the right steps to TRUST IN GOD! I truly appreciate your friendship and always-wonderful, warm, and positive communications! Bless you dear one, and please do stay close! Vance
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Somehow, I feel we will be close in spirit. 5 years that?s wonderful!
Thanks for your heartfelt reply
Trisha
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Somehow, I feel we will be close in spirit. 5 years that?s wonderful!
Thanks for your heartfelt reply
Trisha
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Oh! Indeed, I have no doubt that we are close in spirit! You radiate pure joy to me! Bless you always! Vance
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I hope so
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I hope so
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How kind of you to say that.
Hugs
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Vance;
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem of your commitment to God. I could feel your faith and love for the Lord throughout the lines. May God bless you today and always,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Hi, Vance;
Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem of your commitment to God. I could feel your faith and love for the Lord throughout the lines. May God bless you today and always,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much PATTY, for your lovely review and stars...and oh yes, that wonderful blessing which is truly accepted with love in return as well. It is always my delight to hear from you in all ways and I hope you have a wonderful and blessed week! VanceWo
Comment from RGstar
And so you did my friend, for you have found your light, and may you continue striving towards its center.
My very best wishes, and strong be your faith.
Have a great day.
RG
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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And so you did my friend, for you have found your light, and may you continue striving towards its center.
My very best wishes, and strong be your faith.
Have a great day.
RG
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Wonderful to hear from you brother RG, and thank you for the lovely message and stars blessings to you always! Vance
Comment from Cranial Thinker
A very deeply inner personal worthy goal indeed you learning to walk foreward against the grain of the rest as they walk toe heel instead of heel toe where true advancement becomes so plausibly real learning how to not only see in a true recognizing light the other side of the born birth in dualities walkable likeness but to finally grasp the solidified purpose of our likeness finding that mirrored image which is found within us all because of our kinetic spoken likeness of our Grand Creator remembering the god like gift He gifted us with, the right to chose what is right in all the wrongs also what is wrong in all the rights....I so enjoyed reading this poem of inner acknowledgement in commitment of such a worthy goal, thank you so very much for sharing this wonderful poem....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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A very deeply inner personal worthy goal indeed you learning to walk foreward against the grain of the rest as they walk toe heel instead of heel toe where true advancement becomes so plausibly real learning how to not only see in a true recognizing light the other side of the born birth in dualities walkable likeness but to finally grasp the solidified purpose of our likeness finding that mirrored image which is found within us all because of our kinetic spoken likeness of our Grand Creator remembering the god like gift He gifted us with, the right to chose what is right in all the wrongs also what is wrong in all the rights....I so enjoyed reading this poem of inner acknowledgement in commitment of such a worthy goal, thank you so very much for sharing this wonderful poem....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thank you dear friend, sincerely for these wonderful words of deep thought and rich meaning...as always from you, a gift to be cherished! Your stars have also lighted up my day along with the gift of your generous and always brilliant perspectives! blessings always! Vance
Comment from judiverse
this is beautiful, and the commitment and sincerity really come through. I'm a fan of vmarguarite's artwork, and this one really suggests what you want to say. Just my take, but it looks like prose on the page. Show the poetry off more by not having such long lines. Maybe have a space somewhere between lines, maybe the one starting with "My heart, my soul...." Those are really beautiful words. I think the shorter lines would have more impact. judi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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this is beautiful, and the commitment and sincerity really come through. I'm a fan of vmarguarite's artwork, and this one really suggests what you want to say. Just my take, but it looks like prose on the page. Show the poetry off more by not having such long lines. Maybe have a space somewhere between lines, maybe the one starting with "My heart, my soul...." Those are really beautiful words. I think the shorter lines would have more impact. judi
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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As always...thanks so much judiverse, for your lovely review and kind stars! It's always a delight to hear from you! Vance
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You're quite welcome. Have a great St. Patrick's day. judi
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/prayer and promise to God your soul and heart and ask Him to be with you in darkness and guide you into the light day after day.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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A very well-written poem/prayer and promise to God your soul and heart and ask Him to be with you in darkness and guide you into the light day after day.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much Sandra...for the lovely review and stars. if there is anyone who would get my message, I knew it would be YOU! Blessings and hugs always! Vance
Comment from tony bronk
Until you get smashed in an auto accident! Where is He then? oR, THE STARVING babies all over this land and world? Th hell with your self-righteous sin, save the world! Tony
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Until you get smashed in an auto accident! Where is He then? oR, THE STARVING babies all over this land and world? Th hell with your self-righteous sin, save the world! Tony
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your review and stars tony, and the only way I can honestly answer your question is to say that I KNOW, so I VERY SINCERLY TRUST THAT GOD WILL SPEAK TO US AND GUIDE US IF WE WILL SIMPLY BELIEVE, TRUST, AND LISTEN. THEREIN, WE CAN OFFER HIS GUIDANCE TO DO OUR PART IN SAVING THE WORLD! HIS GRAYNESS, Vance
