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On Him I Must Depend

Short spiritual poem

17 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a truly beautiful and true poem you have penned. You used very good wording and lovely art work. The way I look at dying is that He is coming back again sooner than later I hope. Just hang in there my friend! May God bless you abundantly my friend! love, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the review, Teri.
Comment from Aussie
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Spag: As He LEADS me beside still waters (with respect.) We know not when our day will come to leave this earth. Sometimes I wish I didn't wake up; there must be more for us to do. Getting His message out there is what we can do. His love liveth for evermore. XXK.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the nice review and for the spag heads up, It is fixed
Comment from Gloria ....
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So beautifully stated, Patricia. It's good to see you back and posting and I hope that you are doing as well as can be expected.

A beautiful poem and presentation and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the nice review.
Comment from ameen786
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That's what He expects of us my friend; to be dependent and have faith in Him and you reflect those sentiments so beautifully; inspiring poem, thanks for sharing and God bless you.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Sasha
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Didn't your doctor just tell you you had 15-10 years left? I think living with your daughter will add improvement to your health and attitude. lovely poem and as always, inspiring.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review, Sasha. Yes he said 15-20 years, but let's face it I will be 80 in twelve weeks, and a getting old I am sure my health may well get better when I am living with my daughter and the stress of owning a home will ease.
Comment from lyenochka
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Your poem does remind me of Psalm 23. I like how you show such dependence on the Lord. It's odd that both when we're really young and when we're old, we learn to be more dependent and trusting in Him.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review, Helen
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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And aren't we all so fortunate that God is always there for us! Your words are, as always, honest and inspired. I hope you have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review, Brenda.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 20-Mar-2018
    You're welcome, Patricia.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I love this inspirational poem full of faith, hope, and dependence on Him. It's written like a little prayer or psalms. You did a wonderful job. I love the message of this well written poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review, Jeffrey.
Comment from robina1978
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A beautiful photo with a bible quote in it, I thought. Are you so weak just now? And are you soon going to die? You can't leave yet. I hope you understand we love your work. This one rhymes all the way.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review, Ine.
Comment from Joan E.
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I know this is a difficult time with all the details of your move bearing down on you. I am glad you can find solace in your faith, and I hope this spiritual self-talk keeps you strong. The serene, embedded artwork is very effective, and I am certain it is your creation. Best wishes- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
    Thank you for the nice review, Joan.