A Torn Life
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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is an excellent poem describing the narcissist. You shine the light on this kind of personality for the reader to see clearly what they're like. Thanks for sharing this informative and well written poem.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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This is an excellent poem describing the narcissist. You shine the light on this kind of personality for the reader to see clearly what they're like. Thanks for sharing this informative and well written poem.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thank so much for your validating review. Part of the problem is the Narcissist is often charming when out socially, ,which makes the victim feel even more crazy and vunerable to self doubt.
Have a great day, Jeffrey
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good example of a loop poem. A bad example of a life. No one needs to live through that misery.
Well written, and well said. Head for the door indeed.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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This is a good example of a loop poem. A bad example of a life. No one needs to live through that misery.
Well written, and well said. Head for the door indeed.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Hii Sharon, thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Others can so easily destroy us with words. Why do we let that happen? But we all do. I had an ex sister in law who was and is a sociopath. Doesn't care who she destroys even her kids. Sickening. We tried to get my brother to run but he wouldn't listen. Boy is he sorry. Very well done, I'm sure there is a name for the type of poetry that uses the same last work as the first word in the next line. Really great.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Others can so easily destroy us with words. Why do we let that happen? But we all do. I had an ex sister in law who was and is a sociopath. Doesn't care who she destroys even her kids. Sickening. We tried to get my brother to run but he wouldn't listen. Boy is he sorry. Very well done, I'm sure there is a name for the type of poetry that uses the same last work as the first word in the next line. Really great.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Hi Roxanna, yes the style is LOOP poetry. It was such a nice review thank you.
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Your loop poem hold great truths and a powerful message. Unfortunately, many narcissists populate our society today. Narcissism is rabid. You characterize the narcissistic lover very well. And by all means: RUN! Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Hello!
Your loop poem hold great truths and a powerful message. Unfortunately, many narcissists populate our society today. Narcissism is rabid. You characterize the narcissistic lover very well. And by all means: RUN! Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thanks very much for your kind review.
Comment from prettybluebirds
I have known several who are just as you indicate here. They are absolutely never, ever wrong. I blocked a friend on facebook because she loved to point out my faults and tell me how superior she was. No one needs that in their life. Great writing.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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I have known several who are just as you indicate here. They are absolutely never, ever wrong. I blocked a friend on facebook because she loved to point out my faults and tell me how superior she was. No one needs that in their life. Great writing.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, I?m glad you disconnected from her.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Trisha;
This was an informative little poem, but very sad. It is sometimes scary to realize how it is we were taken down to our lowest level. Once we reach that level, it is very hard to pull ourselves back from the brink. Thank you for sharing this work, perhaps it can help someone dealing with this issue,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Hi, Trisha;
This was an informative little poem, but very sad. It is sometimes scary to realize how it is we were taken down to our lowest level. Once we reach that level, it is very hard to pull ourselves back from the brink. Thank you for sharing this work, perhaps it can help someone dealing with this issue,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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It was an answer to my dilemma of why does he act this way? I ended up sick from the stress twice and the decided to fight back to health. I have become much stronger and now I can reject the projections when I KNOW one is not true..Self doubts
are no longer an issue.
Your supportive reviews are always appreciated.
Hugs,
Trisha
Comment from antonieta
I liked your poem. I suppose it is free verse - not very acquainted with this genre. You still provided artistic expression: It was intersting that you use rhyme in the end and beginning of each line.
Antonieta
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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I liked your poem. I suppose it is free verse - not very acquainted with this genre. You still provided artistic expression: It was intersting that you use rhyme in the end and beginning of each line.
Antonieta
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Hi, actually, the style is called Loop poetry. I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! This is a powerful write Trisha, stand well back and give this guy some space and don't rise to the comments or head strong actions! No feelings of love could be afforded to such a person, but realising someone is like this is the first step to controlling your life I think, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Wow! This is a powerful write Trisha, stand well back and give this guy some space and don't rise to the comments or head strong actions! No feelings of love could be afforded to such a person, but realising someone is like this is the first step to controlling your life I think, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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I knew too late that something was wrong, but divorce was not my choice. Only recently have I found answers to my many questions. The puzzle is now complete, too little, too late in life. I?m much stronger now, and don?t take his projections to heart ~ but my love has diminished big time.
Hugs, Trisha
