Paradise Lost
5-7-5 Contest Entry13 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What and rxcellent entry in this bye bye blackbird poetry contest, they are indeed beautiful birds, we visit Indonesia frequently. Beautifully presented and worded, good luck, in the contest, well done, blessings, Roy
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What and rxcellent entry in this bye bye blackbird poetry contest, they are indeed beautiful birds, we visit Indonesia frequently. Beautifully presented and worded, good luck, in the contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
Comment from Henry King
Excellent timely writing. Nature, in an unnatural change, man made. Not even in man's image, but of his garbage. Poem speaks of losses, and that should never be. What is the gain? Ultimately, flora and fauna to include man, gone. Is that the best we can do?
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Excellent timely writing. Nature, in an unnatural change, man made. Not even in man's image, but of his garbage. Poem speaks of losses, and that should never be. What is the gain? Ultimately, flora and fauna to include man, gone. Is that the best we can do?
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this a good entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your message of the plight to the beautiful Bird of Paradise is well told.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this a good entry for the Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your message of the plight to the beautiful Bird of Paradise is well told.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
