Strange poet's dilenma
An imagined silly poet situation19 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
A great read-aloud piece. Humorous interaction between the tapping pen psycho and the narrator with the silent keyboard. Love how he talked the thief out of wanting it especially the part about rhyme.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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A great read-aloud piece. Humorous interaction between the tapping pen psycho and the narrator with the silent keyboard. Love how he talked the thief out of wanting it especially the part about rhyme.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for your great review and generous stars for this really "out of the box" work! I had a lot of fun with this and I'm really happy to know it brought some smiles....especially to you dear one! Blessings always! Vance
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! A good one, Vance. The plot foiled by a clever, quick-thinking poet--YOU. I got a kick out of this amusing piece. Don't mess with my computer or interfere with my poetry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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LOL! A good one, Vance. The plot foiled by a clever, quick-thinking poet--YOU. I got a kick out of this amusing piece. Don't mess with my computer or interfere with my poetry. Marilyn
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the big smile and great review and stars Marilyn! it is always a genuine delight to hear from you and I'm really happy to know that you got a giggle out of this one! Blessings always! Vance
Comment from tfawcus
Greta entertainment value here, Vance! I had many a smile as I read through this one. A case of imagination running wild to rather good effect! Much enjoyed!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Greta entertainment value here, Vance! I had many a smile as I read through this one. A case of imagination running wild to rather good effect! Much enjoyed!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much Tony for this great review and as always a great delight to hear from you!blessings! VAnce
Comment from lyenochka
Well, with all the gun violence, I didn't think this was as funny a situation that you meant it to be. Glad it was only imagined. And yes, that clicking sound can be silenced as a setting on the iPad. Hope all's well, Vance!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Well, with all the gun violence, I didn't think this was as funny a situation that you meant it to be. Glad it was only imagined. And yes, that clicking sound can be silenced as a setting on the iPad. Hope all's well, Vance!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Sorry to not have given thought to that issue but thanks for your kind review! Vance
Comment from Sherman541
This little story that you made was awfully good in many ways. It rhymed quite well and the antidote was, quite a silly note. He did get his due, the bad guy, but then left a you with a fluke too. So, I did get a chuckle, maybe two, within this story you so blindly told, on a line to line kind of rhyme. Sherman541
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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This little story that you made was awfully good in many ways. It rhymed quite well and the antidote was, quite a silly note. He did get his due, the bad guy, but then left a you with a fluke too. So, I did get a chuckle, maybe two, within this story you so blindly told, on a line to line kind of rhyme. Sherman541
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks Sherman, for you very kind and generous review, so very much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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You are very welcome :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
This writing gave me my laugh for the day. It is humorous and well written. I truly enjoyed every word of this silly ditty. I haven't reviewed any of your work for a while and look what I have been missing. LOL
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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This writing gave me my laugh for the day. It is humorous and well written. I truly enjoyed every word of this silly ditty. I haven't reviewed any of your work for a while and look what I have been missing. LOL
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks Pretty one! don't be a stranger now!! stay tuned! Blessing always! Vance
Comment from Gert sherwood
Really good Vance so do I get the feeling that you were the poet imagining you were in a silly situation
Smiles, it was fun reading and thank you for sharing.
Gert
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Really good Vance so do I get the feeling that you were the poet imagining you were in a silly situation
Smiles, it was fun reading and thank you for sharing.
Gert
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello, dearest!! indeed i was dealing with one of those non-ignorable mind dumps and just had to share the fun with anyone who might enjoy the trip! NO illegal drugs, or alcohol were involved,, but given the amount of meds I'm on with Alzheimer's, there are no dimensions that are listed to be out of possibilities...frankly, even to be in..possibilities! Love and hugs! Vance
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You are welcome Vance
Tell us more of your feelings struggling with Alzheimer's
Gert
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Oh' these days, I'm not surprised about anything! that pops outa the old mind jelly, but glad some of it tickles like the good old days!
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Oh! Dear Gert..how I'm learning that it's really an amusement park out there and I recognize it cause I grew up in one! hope it sticks! love Vance
Comment from Bucketlist
Okay Vince, you have me hooked on this ditty. Imagination is diversity, and there's a lot here!
It was easier to read than I first anticipated . Trying to focus on anything with anoying noisy people is hard. Well explained in verse?
Would you do me the honor of writing your view about having Alzheimer's? I want to include it in my book, " VOICES OF BRAIN CHALLENGES"
P
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Okay Vince, you have me hooked on this ditty. Imagination is diversity, and there's a lot here!
It was easier to read than I first anticipated . Trying to focus on anything with anoying noisy people is hard. Well explained in verse?
Would you do me the honor of writing your view about having Alzheimer's? I want to include it in my book, " VOICES OF BRAIN CHALLENGES"
P
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for you delightful, generous review and stars, so sincerely appreciated! Vance. Re: I wrote a poem related to my experience and will forward it from my portfolio but it primarily deals with the blessing I received in the form of a tiny puppy. as to the overall perspectives when I learned that I had ALZ, I was told that it was not a cure-able disease and death would be a surety in a non-predictable time period! Two doctors later I was offered an opportunity to join a clinical trial program for a new drug, which I've now been in for over two years and feeling very normal...although they do not report if the drug is actually working....I feel that it must be! but everything about them and it is super top secret so i cannot offer more on that. It is difficult to relate in any really meaningful terms what it's like to be told that you have a disease which is 100% terminal and you are certainly going to die but ....in a non-predictable time period. Personally, it was my decision at that time to put my faith in GOD and keep my prayers consistent and sincere. That is the most confident thing anyone can do, if they are indeed, a 'TRUE BELIEVER"..(which I am and always have been). I hope this helps and I'm always open to help you in any way! Vance
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Thanks so much Vance, I applaud you
Hugs
Comment from Alexander Vasa
You have a good imagination here in your poem. I only noticed an error in the title. I think you mean 'dilemma'. I noticed nothing else and thanks for sharing your poem, Ana.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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You have a good imagination here in your poem. I only noticed an error in the title. I think you mean 'dilemma'. I noticed nothing else and thanks for sharing your poem, Ana.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks Ana: for the kind and generous review and stars and also the tip on my miss spelling. PS: I'm really good at that!! too good!! Blessings always! Vance
