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The Life of Mrs. Armstrong

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Comment from lyenochka
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Oh My Gosh! That's the perfect title for this chapter. What a lot of squeamishness has to be overcome to do this job! I'm glad that the students were so willing and relieved they didn't have to refrigerate the specimens!
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Do anyone know how much you should drink, (Does) unless it's different in Canadian English. It could be changed to "Do any of you"

Some tech decide (techs)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much, Helene for reviewing and your great comments. Canada is slightly different, specific areas use 'do' and others use 'does'. I just grew up in between, lol. Just like specific phrases in certain areas here. I had no idea what a 'hiney' was other than it was a body part, a kind nurse explained it to me, lol.
reply by lyenochka on 28-Jan-2022
    That's funny! I thought "hiney" was more an American word. They use it for that silly toilet paper ad with the bears.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
    Of course it is, from North Carolina and I had no clue what a 'hiney' was. Way back when I first moved here they didn't have those darn commercials, lol.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Thank you for sharing another informative and interesting post. It must be a challenge to teach new students. This is a good way for them to learn by submitting their own samples and analyzing them. Clearly written. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Thank you Marilyn, I really appreciate your kind comments and great observations.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Urine bottles are one thing but stools is altogether more complex and, dare I say it, personal. I have been part of a bowel cancer screening programme for some years now and I can't say I enjoy the process of providing three smear samples of stool over three consecutive days every year. There is a natural revulsion so I can understand the class' reaction.

I guess this is something one could only do with a class who have learnt to trust the teacher. Can you imagine having to understudy a strange class in this activity, without any prior knowledge of them or they of you? This lot could well revert to type if the circumstances were not to their liking.

I think something has been omitted here:
"Each student came for with their urine specimen..." Did you mean came forth or perhaps forward?

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much for reviewing. I agree it is not one's most favorite thing. I mean it is one thing to change a baby's messy diaper but definitely different when collecting or testing stool, although I must say from the nursing side - colostomy bags are not a thrill either. I will correct that error in a few minutes.
Comment from robina1978
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I have no clue who you are, but either your did loads of research or you are in some medical profession. I can understand the urine samples. What the stools are going to prove, I really don't know. Well written. No changes needed.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    Thank you for reading and reviewing, I do so thank you for your kind comments. I am retired from the medical field so I have an abundance of information. These poor lab techs will end up testing everything pertaining to the human body.