Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Hello Joan,
This is a fun poem that's right up my ally
being a fan of fantasy stories and poems
I guess J k Rowling's world is the closest we're likely to come
to meeting all the magical folk
A very clever rhyme scheme
Excellent post for the potlatch
I hope you get your wish and magically heal Earth and plants
RS

I'll be posting a series of stories about the fae, shortly.

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 05-May-2018

Thanks for the fine review and rating. Maybe if we could magically cure plants then we could
learn to change that magic to cure cancer or some other human affliction.

Joan

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork.
-A good magical poem
with magical rhyme, too, Joan.
-Effective examples that show
this special world very well.
-My favorite line is
"I wish to magically heal Earth and plants"
-They definitely need healing.

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 05-May-2018

Thanks for reading and reviewing this. I appreciate all the stars.


Joan

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-May-2018

You are welcome, Joan.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I love your sweet imagination of the "land of the faerie." I didn't know what a gryphon was but do know what a griffon was (my college mascot). Great view of the rhyme scheme to see the magic in it.

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Thanks for the kind words and high rating. I appreciate both.


dragonpoet

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

The nerd in me really enjoyed this piece, it was well written and fun to fantasize about the far away land that was described, I wish I was there to. Well done

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Thanks from an up and coming fantasy nerd. Glad you liked it.

dp

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

I like the picture. This is a very interesting write that is filled with emotions and imagery. The reader really liked and will return to read more.

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 04-May-2018

Thanks< Harry, for your continued support. I'm glad you liked the poem.

Joan

Comment from Air Spirit

Excellent

A fun and magical read... this would be a mystical and wondrous place I certainly wish I could visit.. I felt as if I were with you in the poem... laying on the grass, looking at all the mystical creatures in the sky.. and communing with the dragons and dragonflies on the blanket of green grass.. the poem transported me on a journey that I enjoyed from the heart and my soul... thank you for sharing this with me..

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Glad my words gave you that feeling. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

dp

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

I suspect there is a faerie out there who would love to assist your wishes and turn them into reality. Love the image too cute. As always dragonpoet looking forward to more fun. yours, di

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Thanks, Di, for you fun review. Glad you enjoyed it.

Joan

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well done. Nicely rhymed, a nice theme and story.
The picture is a good match as well.
Well done and thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Sharon, thanks for reading and reviewing. Both are much appreciated.

Joan

Comment from nartoonla

Excellent

loved it, and where is the land you wish to be, sounds like Ireland. Scotland perhaps or better Wales to me. Keep wishing and maybe there you will be, in that case, pack I will, and or where else does this mystical magical place be?

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

It may be a mixture of all of them and England too. Though I have visited any of these countries, except for a 5 hour layover
in London, I would love to have a long visit for 73% of my ancestors hale there.

dp

reply by nartoonla on 03-May-2018

London is wonderful, and as Lady Churchill one said, To be bored of London is to be bored of life, But she at the same time had to say it ha, in brief. But the magic as far as I am concerned is in the others and if you go, do not miss! I have lived there and been but Scotland,

reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Scotland is the place I want to go most. My family castle is still there. Still lived in my the clan cheif
Sir Lachlan.

dp

reply by nartoonla on 03-May-2018

Nice it must be and being somewhat royal what a treat if not full blue. It is pretty cold but depends, once again wish it upon a star and may it come true!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about a dream to be the hero for all on earth since childhood. Saving small animals on the earth and be the friend of a friendly dragon.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Glad you enjoyed it, Sandra. Thanks for the nice review.

Have a nice weekend.

Joan