Sweet Sixteen
a poem using these words5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse or blank verse adaptation, Sweet Sixteen, shows us ourselves at this tender age of touching and finding that is usually constrained by concerned parents. Nice to know they're there, but not always.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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This free verse or blank verse adaptation, Sweet Sixteen, shows us ourselves at this tender age of touching and finding that is usually constrained by concerned parents. Nice to know they're there, but not always.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thanks for the insights - appreciate your input and kind comments.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Mystery Writer, :)
I wish you all the luck in the contest. This is the second shortest poem I found so far. :D
I found one typo, but it may be what you meant:
So...how did (do?) we present our case?
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Hello, Mystery Writer, :)
I wish you all the luck in the contest. This is the second shortest poem I found so far. :D
I found one typo, but it may be what you meant:
So...how did (do?) we present our case?
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Yes, that was a typo. Thank you for catching it and for your insights.
Comment from BeasPeas
LOL! You can't fool old mom. This is a cute poem using the words and illustrated nicely. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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LOL! You can't fool old mom. This is a cute poem using the words and illustrated nicely. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Just a bit of fun with the words assigned. And, yes, mom's eyes can see through kryptonite...
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I am LOL! All moms develop that ability.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the love affairs that the lovers are on their way to get their love recognised in the family; now they wait for presenting their case; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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This speaks about the love affairs that the lovers are on their way to get their love recognised in the family; now they wait for presenting their case; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned using the words from the Write a poem using these words...contest. Great words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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This is a very well written poem you have penned using the words from the Write a poem using these words...contest. Great words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 09-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
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Thank you!
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you are so welcome!
