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Comment from frogbook
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Great thoughts expressed here in a wonderful form. Excellent presentation. Hopefully a lesson to be learned for many. Very current and strong.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Hi JoAnn, thank you very much for your supportive review, much appreciated

    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Trisha;
I like how you used two nonets to contrast strong women to the weak. It is so sad when women tear each other down. It seems like they do not understand they are being their own worst enemies.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    I?m glad you enjoyed the style and subject.
    Thanks, hugs, Trisha
Comment from Marge Setzer
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WOW! And yes...women are not born that way. I read a book by Susan Jeffers called Feel the Fear and Do It Anyway. In it she encourages doing the thing that you fear doing. The fear will be there, but only by taking the first step will you overcome that which is holding you back. You become stronger each time you face the fear and make an attempt to reach a goal. To me, this is a major step in becoming a stronger woman. Rejoicing in the accomplishments of other women is equally as important. Supporting others is supporting ourselves. Thank you for your thoughts on the subject. Marge

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    It?s a shame that it takes so long to become one for some women,. Verbal abuse teaches a lot of things, and finally strengthens a woman. I really appreciate your review, it is validating.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks they are strong women really who help, care and mend others come up in life; well written, well done; thank you for sharing. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Thanks review is very positive.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Bucketlist. I enjoyed the first part of this more than the second half. I don't believe in anything negative concerning women or men. We are not put on this planet to judge intentions and for me that's what the second half felt like. good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Your opinion is noted. My friend wanted it this way for her presentation. Your review is appreciated
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written and very interesting poem you have penned for a friend. You used great descriptive words and great imagery. Please check this out:
To enable us to become pioneers in every part of lif
To enable us to become pioneers in every part of (life).

Great job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Thanks, Teri. She said her audience liked it, so I?m happy! Your eagle eyed proofreading is very much appreciated. I?m glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your super review, hugs, Trisha
    Blessings to you as well
Comment from Sherman541
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This is a fantastic poem of support! I love the way you started with Strong and ended with Strength. The diamond shape was a Perfect Idea. Starting with the supporters on top and non-supporters on the bottom. Your friend is a very lucky person to have such a friend as you, to write such a beautiful tribute. Sherman541

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Wow, ?you blew my socks off? with this review! I am honored, and glad you enjoyed reading it
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by Sherman541 on 10-Mar-2018
    You are very welcome and you blew my sock off with this poem it was fantastic ;)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Thanks again for the honor
Comment from Gloria ....
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A wonderful diamond shape, BL and filled with excellent social commentary and insight. So true, that strong women build each other up instead of tearing each other down.

Sabotage, cliques, gossiping are all the domain of the envious and women are no less susceptible than anyone.

A nice gift to your friend and I'm confident she will love it!

Great job you.

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Thank you Gloria forbyiudr supportived