It's Spring, Baby!
When it gets slightly warm16 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Rox, I see no sin in going shopping! Especially for essentials like ... new outfits! Plus all the go with its, shoes, handbag, new hairstyle, manicure, you know, the necessities of life! LOL! Well done, my friend, a fun, jaunty poem! Roll on the sunshine! :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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LOL! Rox, I see no sin in going shopping! Especially for essentials like ... new outfits! Plus all the go with its, shoes, handbag, new hairstyle, manicure, you know, the necessities of life! LOL! Well done, my friend, a fun, jaunty poem! Roll on the sunshine! :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Yes one much have the bare essentials in life. =} Thanks so much Sandra. Rox
Comment from Ricky1024
"It's Spring Baby!" Was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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"It's Spring Baby!" Was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much Dr Ricky. It was very fun to write. Have a good rest of your weekend. Rox
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how buying becomes a major act with the beginning of warm and going away winter; spring is the time for spending money and enjoy buying; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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This speaks how buying becomes a major act with the beginning of warm and going away winter; spring is the time for spending money and enjoy buying; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Yes for some reason nice weather makes one want to shop. =} Thanks so much Dr Alcreator. Have a good weekend. Rox
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a fun sing-along poem with jaunty words that make it a joy to read, I love the last line about snowing again! This is a delightful poem that brought much fun to my day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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This is such a fun sing-along poem with jaunty words that make it a joy to read, I love the last line about snowing again! This is a delightful poem that brought much fun to my day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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I'm glad you found it fun, I had fun writing it too. Thank so much Dolly. Rox
Comment from Pamusart
Nicely done. The red background made it hard for me to read. The letters sunk into the backgrounf. Just wanted to let you. Not making a criticism. The last vers is a stroke of surprise and brilliance. Most women like to shop. But, I am not one of them. My daughter and others I know take great pride in getting the lowest price. But, lowest priced things are often inferior and do not last due to breakage. She gets us all kinds of stuff for Christmas that we can't use or that breaks. But, most men absolutely hate to shop. Especially if they are with their wives shopping for her. She buying for him is not that much better. I have seen a few husbands who act perfectly. Mine is one, thank goodness. My son is not. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Nicely done. The red background made it hard for me to read. The letters sunk into the backgrounf. Just wanted to let you. Not making a criticism. The last vers is a stroke of surprise and brilliance. Most women like to shop. But, I am not one of them. My daughter and others I know take great pride in getting the lowest price. But, lowest priced things are often inferior and do not last due to breakage. She gets us all kinds of stuff for Christmas that we can't use or that breaks. But, most men absolutely hate to shop. Especially if they are with their wives shopping for her. She buying for him is not that much better. I have seen a few husbands who act perfectly. Mine is one, thank goodness. My son is not. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Yes I am sorry about the background. I thought i fixed it, but it was still hard to read. I changed the background color so as not to strain other eyes. I don't enjoy shopping either. Our nearest center always has a million people there. I don't think that's fun at all. I do a lot of shopping on the internet. So Much easier and it comes to the house. =} Thanks so much. Have a good weekend. Rox
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U r welcome. I also shop mostly on the internet
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Roxanna. What a delight this was for me to read tonight! It is charming and the rhymes are cool. If I had anything to offer it would be to make the text slightly larger so it could be read a bit easier. Awesome write. xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Hello Roxanna. What a delight this was for me to read tonight! It is charming and the rhymes are cool. If I had anything to offer it would be to make the text slightly larger so it could be read a bit easier. Awesome write. xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Yes I did change the background, sorry about that. I do think I remember you, I've been away a long time, but had the writing bug again. Thank you so much. have a great weekend. Rox
