Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-You have all the requirements
of a haiku, including nature imagery
and the kigo.
-The satori is also good.
-Good luck in the contest, Zanya.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Great review -zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2018

You are welcome, Zanya.

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I love that picture :) I'm in a good mood today because our snow is finally melting. We're to get seasonal high temperatures this week which should melt every last snowflake. Yay! So I love everything about this haiku. Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

I'm delighted ..thanks for the encouragemnt ..hope Spring arrives soon B-rr--rrzanya

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Zanya. This is a great entry for this Haiku Poetry contest and you should do very well. You are on point with the words and the last line is superior. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Wow --what an encouraging review --zanya

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

So very true, the little green shoots start popping about the same the ice starts melting and the birds come singing. Love the visual and the perfect statement for your Haiku. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks for reading and review zanya

reply by Sherman541 on 19-Mar-2018

You are welcome :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a nice and interesting observation of seasonal rhythm of Nature in action as winter snow melts and tiny green shoots by degrees come up; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Great Haiku. Strong word choice that creates striking imagery. I am also looking forward to Spring and all the promise it holds. Thanks and have a pleasant day. Ana.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

After two snowstorms and a possible third one this weekend here in New England, I am looking forward to some change in rhythm! Little green shoots would be a welcome sight! Great haiku.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018