Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

I really appreciated this poem. You captured the essence of the story so sweetly. "Our shadows fell across the floor, as daylight turned to night", that is my favorite line. Good luck to you.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thank you for this great review, and for taking time to read, I really appreciate it.

Comment from nartoonla

Excellent

What a feeling that all set... all sorts of emotions and then the final feeling at the end... a victory at last. Enjoyed it. Clap, clap. clap... Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thank you for such a great review, I really appreciate it.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

I believe there is a natural bond between romance and poetry, and if you add rhyme, you find that there is such a feeling pf bliss that it gives you wings and puts a smile on your face. That's what your poem did for me. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thank you for such a wonderful review, I really appreciate it.

reply by victor 66 on 11-Mar-2018

You are most welcome.

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

A perfect example of a well written rhymed poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and the story it tells. The rhymes are expertly composed and flow quite well.

All the best in the contest.

Eugene

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it.