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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The sculpture has a feeling of speed and has been cleverly made, along with your poem short and quick to give that feeling of fast paced movement throughout, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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The sculpture has a feeling of speed and has been cleverly made, along with your poem short and quick to give that feeling of fast paced movement throughout, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thank you Dolly. I liked that essence of speed engendered here too. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ekphrastic poem about the forgotten patriots on horseback. The artwork is very good and the photograph captures the essence of the artwork well.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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A very well-written ekphrastic poem about the forgotten patriots on horseback. The artwork is very good and the photograph captures the essence of the artwork well.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thank you Sandra. I appreciate you fine review. Have a great day.
Comment from sunnilicious
A female rider sounds commendable for the time period. That is a wonderful statue and poem to commemorate the rise of America. Good visual imagery created. Nice story in a poem. Good flow of rhymes. Nice work. Good notes. Goodnight :)
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A female rider sounds commendable for the time period. That is a wonderful statue and poem to commemorate the rise of America. Good visual imagery created. Nice story in a poem. Good flow of rhymes. Nice work. Good notes. Goodnight :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thank you Alicia. Good morning now. Happy to read your tevview with my coffee.
Comment from Pamusart
I thought you were talking about Joan of Arc at first. She qualified not that much earlier. Within a couple of hundred years. But, good to know about these other patriots. There had to be more than just Revere. Thank you for allowing a glimpse into some heroines. But, men get all of the credit as usual. Thank you for sharing our poem
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I thought you were talking about Joan of Arc at first. She qualified not that much earlier. Within a couple of hundred years. But, good to know about these other patriots. There had to be more than just Revere. Thank you for allowing a glimpse into some heroines. But, men get all of the credit as usual. Thank you for sharing our poem
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thank you Pamusart. Point well taken. Today's women are starting to be heard and seen.
Comment from kiwisteveh
And does your patriot have a name, or is that forgotten as well?
Interesting form and an interesting story. I like poems that remind us of those 'other' heroes.
Sweet rhyming and a good tale.
Steve
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And does your patriot have a name, or is that forgotten as well?
Interesting form and an interesting story. I like poems that remind us of those 'other' heroes.
Sweet rhyming and a good tale.
Steve
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Thank you Steve. The name is unknown.
