Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Trisha;
A wonderful poem for the Shout out to the Lord club AND the Potlatch poetry. I think too many people forget to thank Him for the things He provides every day, and they only drop to their knees when they are in trouble,

~patty~

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

How true! I am filling my goals I wrote about before. I feel much more spiritual and fulfilled now than last year.
Thanks for reviewing
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

God is wonderful and he does so much for us. It is sad that many do not see or know God. He is always with us, beside us or carries us. Even when we feel alone and that no one cares, God does and he is there for us. Very captivating and delightful poem of God and his love for us. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

A great review thank you
Hugs, Trisha

reply by Sherman541 on 08-Mar-2018

You are so welcome :) Hugs to you too:)

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Clearly a spiritual poem. But also a religious one. The good side of the Creator. Nicely done. Flows easily with emotion and has a rhyming scheme. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018

You?re welcome Pam, thank you for a positive review
Hugs, TRISHA

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

A wonderful inspirational write. It was quite refreshing and enjoyable to read. I've added it to my list of favorite poems.

Thank you for this uplifting and comforting poem.

Eugene

By the way what is a Magic 9 poem?

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Magic 9 Poetry

This style appears to have been inspired by a poet misspelling
the word "abracadabra." When you remove the r's from "abracadabra," a new poetic form emerges---> abacadaba

This 9-line poem DOESN'T HAVEANY RULES AS FAR AS METER OR SUBJECT MATTER. Also, the LENGTH of lines [syllables in each line] may be AUTHOR'S CHOICE. However, the example uses 6, 7, 8 syllables. Author's may chose according to what they write. But in the end, one wants their lines to flow smoothly. Don't over think this--aim for a nice balance of syllables per line OR have them all the same length--your choice.

Thank you very much Eugene. You gave me a lovely complimentary review, which is heartwarming. I hope you try this style of poetry. I belong to the challenge Potluck club.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Bucketlist
I enjoyed your Magic 9 challenge poem. You did a great job with the style. Your lines flow smoothly with great rhymes & a super message. I like the picture choice, too. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thanks for all your compliments, Jan. I?m glad you enjoyed reading it.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a beautiful write filled with faithful sentiments and warm loving and tender words. The list of troubles in the picture is daunting and I tried not to look! Your poem is delightful though, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thanks very much, Dolly, you know me quite well,!
I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hi
I like your poem and your theme and was very blessed as I read it. I would mention that the word "maze" is misspelled. Your word means corn. It was well done and a nice verse.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Well DUH! Thanks for correcting my spelling error. Thanks so muchfor your terrific review.
Hugs, Trisha