I Imagine White Tulips
A Cleave Poem63 total reviews
Comment from jppoet
This is not only a glorious poem by its own richness of reason but a masterpiece of technique, as explained in your notes. blessings, john
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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This is not only a glorious poem by its own richness of reason but a masterpiece of technique, as explained in your notes. blessings, john
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello John,
So pleased you appreciate my cleave poem.
It is challenging to pen one of these, but also very satisfying...
Thank you for your positive and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from cailinraine8
This is a fine example of a cleave poem, which I am just now learning about. What an enormous word is "forgiveness"... the possibilities that it promises... you have presented this in a lovely and eloquent way. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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This is a fine example of a cleave poem, which I am just now learning about. What an enormous word is "forgiveness"... the possibilities that it promises... you have presented this in a lovely and eloquent way. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Cailin!
Thank you ever so much for your complimentary and positive review!
I really enjoyed penning this poem...
diane
Comment from ameen786
Hi KT, my friend this is a dynamite of a write, Wow! Quite a challenge to compose in this form and you did great; profound theme, simply beautiful! And thanks for the wonderful author notes, now I have to collect so many white tulips...a never ending task.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hi KT, my friend this is a dynamite of a write, Wow! Quite a challenge to compose in this form and you did great; profound theme, simply beautiful! And thanks for the wonderful author notes, now I have to collect so many white tulips...a never ending task.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello ameen786!
This is only the second cleave poem I have ever attempted to pen. Man! They are really challenging!
So incredibly honored and humbled by your appreciation of the form and my words.
Thank you so much!
diane
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo of white tulips that complement your poem perfectly. I have not seen a cleave poem for ages. It is a nice form. Yours is very well done. I am not sure how it will do in the I imagine contest. Maybe well. I wish you the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Excellent photo of white tulips that complement your poem perfectly. I have not seen a cleave poem for ages. It is a nice form. Yours is very well done. I am not sure how it will do in the I imagine contest. Maybe well. I wish you the best for the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hi Robina,
I enjoyed penning this poem very much.
Thank you for your complimentary review!
diane
Comment from MelB
This is a fantastic poem written on forgiveness. I'm amazed how many people don't know how to apologize to others, and what it does for a person to hear those words.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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This is a fantastic poem written on forgiveness. I'm amazed how many people don't know how to apologize to others, and what it does for a person to hear those words.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hi MelB,
Thank you so much for your exceptional rating and your appreciative review. This is my second cleave poem...ever. (And it many be my last! = Really challenging to make it all work!) :)
Thank you again,
diane
Comment from Joy Graham
Wow, I haven't seen a cleave poem for a while. Sally Yocom used to do them a lot. She's no longer active on the site. They are way above my skill level and they give me a headache. I'm impressed that you make this look so easy. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Wow, I haven't seen a cleave poem for a while. Sally Yocom used to do them a lot. She's no longer active on the site. They are way above my skill level and they give me a headache. I'm impressed that you make this look so easy. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Joy,
So pleased you enjoyed my effort. These cleave poems are really challenging!
Thank you again!
diane
Comment from charlene7190
I am in awe of your ability to put together such a fine poem, a three-in-one. I have never read one before so I will say I've learned something new again. Thank you for that. Well written, well done.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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I am in awe of your ability to put together such a fine poem, a three-in-one. I have never read one before so I will say I've learned something new again. Thank you for that. Well written, well done.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Charlene!
This is only the second cleave poem I have ever attempted. They are really challenging in terms of attempting to make sense while getting one's message across. I am currently snowbound...so I had plenty of time to dabble!
Thank you for your wonderful review!
diane
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
This lovely and well-constructed poem holds so much within the lines. Your presentation reminds us that in order to ask forgiveness, we must have pure intentions - like the white tulip.
Whether you read the bold or the regular print, you have an apology, and when the two poems are combined, it is the type of apology many of us are incapable of giving or receiving. Words from a true heart to an open heart willing to forgive.
Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hi there;
This lovely and well-constructed poem holds so much within the lines. Your presentation reminds us that in order to ask forgiveness, we must have pure intentions - like the white tulip.
Whether you read the bold or the regular print, you have an apology, and when the two poems are combined, it is the type of apology many of us are incapable of giving or receiving. Words from a true heart to an open heart willing to forgive.
Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Dear Patty,
I am so honored by your review...and your ability to parse through my poem to reach what I had hoped would be its message. Thank you...
This is only the second cleave poem I have ever attempted. They are really challenging.
I so appreciate your appreciation!
diane
Comment from pome lover
your poem is expressed with sincerity and belief -- lovely thoughts making for a happy disposition, no doubt.
Good reading for a skeptic, like me.
Interesting information about the white tulip. I wasn't aware of it's significance.
Nice to know. thanks.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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your poem is expressed with sincerity and belief -- lovely thoughts making for a happy disposition, no doubt.
Good reading for a skeptic, like me.
Interesting information about the white tulip. I wasn't aware of it's significance.
Nice to know. thanks.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Katharine,
I have my days when I am a skeptic as well!
Thank you so much for your complimentary and thoughtful review!
diane
Comment from The kurlman
Mrs. KT, you are on a roll. I am thankful you put notes below, your wonderful poem. I was confused at first. Three poems in one, fantastic. The art was perfect as usual. I love reading your words they are always deep. The kurlman
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Mrs. KT, you are on a roll. I am thankful you put notes below, your wonderful poem. I was confused at first. Three poems in one, fantastic. The art was perfect as usual. I love reading your words they are always deep. The kurlman
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
More like I am snowbound!
Have you ever attempted one of these cleave poems? They are stinkers! But I needed a challenge, so I went for it.
Thank you so much for your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
Have a wonderful day!
diane
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I have been told my poetry is considered "folk art" please don't confuse me. I just discovered limericks, thinking about entering one. The kurlman
