I Imagine White Tulips
A Cleave Poem63 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
I've never read a cleave poem before today and this one is exceptional in the way the words flow. And the three poems made sense! And expresses a profound truth. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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I've never read a cleave poem before today and this one is exceptional in the way the words flow. And the three poems made sense! And expresses a profound truth. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello June!
Thank you ever so much for your exceptional rating and review. This is my second cleave poem...ever... May be my last! :)
But it was challenging to pen...I love writing in constricted formats...yet I also am a huge fan of free verse! Too funny!
Thank you again; your sentiments are deeply appreciated.
diane
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are kind, heartfelt and
thought provoking. The artwork compliments both the words
and theme of this poem. The reader pondered on the theme
of this poem.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are kind, heartfelt and
thought provoking. The artwork compliments both the words
and theme of this poem. The reader pondered on the theme
of this poem.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello harmony13,
So very pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Zue65
I have never ventured writing a cleave poem, I believe I am not cut for this poetic form. I don't want so many rules restricting my flow of thought. But I definitely enjoyed reading this excellent poem. Keep writing. All the best.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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I have never ventured writing a cleave poem, I believe I am not cut for this poetic form. I don't want so many rules restricting my flow of thought. But I definitely enjoyed reading this excellent poem. Keep writing. All the best.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello nassus1957,
So very pleased you enjoyed my cleave poem. I love the challenge of this format.
Thank you again!
diane
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such uplifting and warm words and if only more people could believe in these beautiful words, the world would be a much better place, a joyful read Diane, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Such uplifting and warm words and if only more people could believe in these beautiful words, the world would be a much better place, a joyful read Diane, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello Dolly!
So very pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you again,
diane
Comment from donette1914
simply outstanding and well chosen words and i would love to see white tulips also. i like the artwork and i hope best for the contest. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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simply outstanding and well chosen words and i would love to see white tulips also. i like the artwork and i hope best for the contest. thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello donette1914,
So very pleased you enjoyed. Thank you for your complimentary review!
diane
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely contest entry.Your positive thoughts put down so beautifully in a poem are very inspirational. I can imagine that too, now we just have to practice it
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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This is a lovely contest entry.Your positive thoughts put down so beautifully in a poem are very inspirational. I can imagine that too, now we just have to practice it
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello Boogienights,
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and complimentary review! Very much appreciated!
diane
Comment from dragonpoet
I think this is one of the hardest form and you did it very well. It scares me. Every way you read it it gives you the meaning of forgiveness.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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I think this is one of the hardest form and you did it very well. It scares me. Every way you read it it gives you the meaning of forgiveness.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
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Hello dragonpoet,
The cleave format really isn't too difficult. I began with the poem on the left, and then wiggled in the one on the right, and then adjusted where needed so that together it all flowed together as one! Just make certain you have plenty of coffee when you attempts one of these! :)
Thank you!
diane
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I would need a lot of diet coke of tea. I don't do coffee.
My pleasure, Diane.
Joan
Comment from tony bronk
A cleave poem is one poem I have never heard of but, it seems a bit complicated but, I still want to give it a try. You certainly did well in your performance of the poem, and I don't know why I said performance but, it just seems to fit? Excellent write. Tony
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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A cleave poem is one poem I have never heard of but, it seems a bit complicated but, I still want to give it a try. You certainly did well in your performance of the poem, and I don't know why I said performance but, it just seems to fit? Excellent write. Tony
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hi Tony!
Snowbound.
House is clean.
Had to find something creative to do.
So...I wrote my cleave poem.
Not a performance.
Just a challenging format...to see if I could do it.
Glad you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
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Your house is clean?! Congrats! I have to clean this room. I paint in here, too! Wish me lots a luck!! haha Tony
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Snowbound> Where ya from?
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Traverse City, Michigan
Northern Lower Michigan.
We are getting blasted, and last weekend, it felt like spring!
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We here in middle wisconsin (almost) chuckle how we always here in the news how it is crossing through the nation and ending wildly in Michigan! So, so often we hear that report! We, where we live in Wisconsin miss all the big storms, summer too! Good luck this summe with the tornadosr! Tony
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, another beautiful poem by this gifted writer - while I paid little attention to the actual construction, the message was clear to me and written smoothly in its free verse style, and is fully compliant with the prompt. Much luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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In my opinion, another beautiful poem by this gifted writer - while I paid little attention to the actual construction, the message was clear to me and written smoothly in its free verse style, and is fully compliant with the prompt. Much luck in the contest...
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
I am honored by your compliment. The cleave format is really challenging to pen...but satisfying when it all comes together...
Thank you for your positive and complimentary review!
diane
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You are most welcome, Diane, a stunning write to be sure...Eve
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the messages of this. You've done a fine job in just using a word and describing the impact it can have when used in certain situations. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written poem. Very nicely done!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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I love the messages of this. You've done a fine job in just using a word and describing the impact it can have when used in certain situations. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written poem. Very nicely done!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Hello Jeffrey,
Thank you ever so much for your gracious and complimentary review!
This one was challenging, but fun to pen!
diane
