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Comment from Henry King
Excellent story. Even though I am not familiar with the premise or characters, I could follow the conversation and envision that in which it was related. One sentence is confusing. Andrew is speaking "... cloud Al ( a person named Al or AI as in Artificial Intelligence) and I ..."
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Excellent story. Even though I am not familiar with the premise or characters, I could follow the conversation and envision that in which it was related. One sentence is confusing. Andrew is speaking "... cloud Al ( a person named Al or AI as in Artificial Intelligence) and I ..."
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Thanks. Glad you liked it
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You are welcome. But, is it Al, i.e., the l is it a lower case L or capital I? They both appear the same, the way you have it entered in your story.
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Yes, maybe I should use full stops. A.I. - artificial intelligence
Comment from apky
You continue to write your story with intricate plotting, great dialogue and believable characters. As in the last couple of chapters, you have succeeded in injecting a fast pace in the reader that keep the reviewer on the edge, compelling them forward with urgent passages such as:
Just a little glitch at the beginning: "clutches" not "cultches"
Excellent write.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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You continue to write your story with intricate plotting, great dialogue and believable characters. As in the last couple of chapters, you have succeeded in injecting a fast pace in the reader that keep the reviewer on the edge, compelling them forward with urgent passages such as:
Just a little glitch at the beginning: "clutches" not "cultches"
Excellent write.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Thanks. Glad you liked it
