Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A lovely photo of a female that complements your chapter very well. I read the synopses first, so that gave better understanding. It intrigues me. Is well written and has a lovely balance between dialogue and narrative. No changes needed.

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you so much, Ine, for that. I'm glad you found the synopsis helpful, it was so kind of your to read it. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Sandra,

I don't see any SPAGS; good writing!
I think I know what is going to happen. I won't write it here -- well, tell me if I'm wrong in private. Wait, others will hear it, oh well, is Joe going to take in Francis?
(Don't tell me if I'm right or wrong -- I will be surprised. :P)

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

LOL, no I won't say whether it's yes or no. I love it when my readers start getting so involved they try to guess what's going to happen. Even if they are way out, sometimes what they think will happen gives me an idea for further in the story. Thank you, Rasmine, for your great review. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

reply by Rasmine on 06-Mar-2018

Hugs back!

reply by Rasmine on 06-Mar-2018

Hugs back!