Comment from frogbook

Excellent

You know what I want you to do-steal some money when you are invisible! How bout from yucci old Sir John. Be sure someone sees it floating-haha. Good chapter full on tense action and problems setting up for the next piece.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

You are as bad as me, JoAnn, lol. I've thought of buying some shares in a company like Google when it first started, I'd be sitting pretty now! lol! Thank you so much for your fun review, my friend. Big hugs. :) Sandra xx

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Sandra,

I apologize I have been lax in reading and reviewing. This being said, I had forgotten how enthralling this wonderful story is. I will strive to read more. exceptional!!


jimi

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Life happens, Jimi, we all have them. I think it's lovely just seeing your name here. I hope you are well? Thank you my friend, for the lovely comments, I really appreciate it. Big hugs, Sandra xxx

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Sandra,

I skipped ahead. I couldn't resist reading the most recent chapter. I'll go back and read the earlier ones, I promise.

I didn't find any spag to speak of. Sometimes when you get to making your plans I get confused and have to go back to re-read u til I understand it. I must be reading too fast and not paying close enough attention.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

LOL, I'm glad you have, you'll get paid for this one! The plot is beginning to come together, but a few little niggles along the way before they all join up. Thank you again, my friend. :)) Sandra (I haven't forgotten the hugs, I just thought you might be feeling a bit suffocated by now! :))

Comment from royowen

Excellent

So good old Mildred has thought of a plan to help poor old Joe, but it's the same old problem for somebody with a good idea and no money...they need a sponsor, an investor needs a good money making idea. Mildred is smart, of course, I think Sir John wants to thank Joe, but then, that's only a thought. It's your book, and all things are possible in fiction, well done Sandra, great scribing, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Mildred is a nice lady, she wouldn't do anything that would hurt anyone. Just wait till you read of her plan. :)) Thank you so much, Roy, for your really lovely review, you are always so kind. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 05-Mar-2018

She's a dark horse, dear Mildred, great character, (all)

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

Good chapter my friend.

I know I can bring something forward in time. I did that on another time-travelling trip just by hiding it in the attic. When I came back to my time, it was there waiting for me.' I smiled as I remembered hiding Lady Ann's jewellery. (misspelled) I just wish this situation was as straight forward as that one.

I used to do this a lot.....synopsizing bits from previous pages either as fillers, or reminders to the readers about something. In this case it isn't necessary, especially when the focus should be on what Daveth has to say.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for this lovely review, my friend, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. The word 'Jewellery, is correct, it's UK English, which is where I'm from and still live, lol! The bits I bring back aren't from this book, they are from the first book in the trilogy which is sometimes needed to explain to those who haven't read the that book, it lets new readers understand how she managed to do certain things. Big hugs, my friend! :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Exceptional

Why won't Veronica ever get ahead? Is she too old for this job? Are the 'powers that be' using her as a pawn in a bet they made? Are they laughing at her right now? Why do you torture her so much, anyway? She still hasn't gotten anywhere. Can she kill John? Oh, she's not the murdering type. Let me go back... I'll take care of that grandpa!

Since she can bring things into the future, she should bring Francis, and he'll be safe and can be adopted in an enlightened century. Joe will just have to take care of himself. Save the kid.

whoever it is who decides these things, doesn't want <-- Remove comma, which separates subject from predicate.

I'm in a very silly mood... got only 2 hours of sleep. :)

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

It's coming, very soon. I did think about bringing him into the future, could you imagine what would happen if they all popped through that time warp? Wouldn't it be fun.... A futuristic book, maybe? Hmmm I could win the lottery every week! LOL!!!

Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, dear friend, and the lovely, fun review. My heads buzzing with ideas now! I've taken that comma out, thanks for that. Big hugs and a sloppy kiss! :)) Sandra xxx

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

There you go! Joe and his wife can offer to take Francis away and raise him if Sir John can provide the money for the move and to start him in the Chocolate business. Sounds smart to me. I love the UK English you use in your story Sandra. Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for another lovely review, Nancy, and I'm not saying either way if that will happen. I wonder what Rosie would think of the red eyes! I'm glad you like my English, sometimes when I write something for Joe and Daveth, I wonder if other English speaking countries will still understand it. So, it's good to know you like it. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxxx

Comment from aryr

Excellent

An absolutely great chapter. The reintroduction of Daveth into the time travel loop was a fantastic idea. It is sad that poor Joe is still in trouble. I am not sure what Mildred is thinking but with her idea that Joe is going to ask Sir John for money, I am sure there is a reason behind this, which I wont comment about at this time other than if I am right, it is a great idea. You did very well Sandra with this chapter. Very enjoyable to read. Thanks.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Aw, what a nice thing to say, thank you so much, Alie, I really appreciate that. Everyone is trying to guess what's going to happen, lol. I'm not saying a word. Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xxxx

reply by aryr on 05-Mar-2018

You are so welcome my friend, I have another writer that has the same thought process- she won't tell or give a clue regarding the future. Ironically I have found myself doing the same. Big hugs in return Sandra.

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, again you've come up with some superb writing. I love Mildred.She's such a character, and, as always, she comes up with some great ideas. I'm looking forward to see what will happen next, and whether they'll be successful. You know I love the story. A big hug. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Mildred is everyone's favourite, it's funny how it turned out that way. But, I'm glad, because she is a character that I can go to town on. Thank you so much for the 6 stars, my dear friend. I'm already into the next part, and even jotting down notes for the next book. I know how the 3rd book will end! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by Ulla on 05-Mar-2018

No wonder everybody loves her. She such a lovely character and wonderfully down to earth. Thats great you're already working on the next part and making notes for the third book. I'm so glad it's all working out. Big hugs back to you.xxx

Comment from apky

Excellent

Quite honestly, Sandra, this was another one of you posts that had me glued to the monitor. Between Veronica and Mildred, I wouldn't tell you which one of them is more indomitable!

'I wouldn't say that, oh Lordy no!' she said, her eyes suddenly full of merriment as she turned from me to James. 'I think we's got ourselves the beginnin' of a plan. Joe's gonna ask Sir John fer some money....'

Not to mention the ever caring and thoughtful Daveth, watching over his loved ones like a hawk.

Brilliant, milady!

Within seconds, she was fasto. ~ no idea what "fasto" means, Sandra, but I guessed "fast asleep"?

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you so much, Aki! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Yes, I put a note at the end saying about the 'Fasto' It is an abbreviation of being 'sound asleep' now. It's common over here, but I wasn't sure if other countries would recognise it. Now I know it's not! lol. Thanks, my friend. Your review is so very encouraging. Biggest hugs. Sandra xxx