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Comment from Pamusart
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This reminds me of a poem I wrote about tethered horses. It is also the second tome tonight that I have seen the image you used. The message is clear. He wants to raise a fu head of steam, cause a splash and let himself go. A delightful idea. Thank you for sharing. Best of luck with your reviews

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
    That image was the subject for the ?picture this? poetry group challenge. I appreciate your kind review
    Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Trisha;
Such a lovely poem about the summer waves. It has been such a long time since I walked on the beach and actually got wet in the waves. (You know what it is like on the northern Pacific coast.) Growing up in New Jersey with miles of beaches, I miss the Atlantic Ocean and body-surfing the waves,

~patty~

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
    I?ve only been to San Diego and north a little, but the scenery with Pelicans and Seals was enchanting !
    . Thank you for your supportive complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from frogbook
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Good interpretation of the latest pic-still working on an idea for mine-best get on the ball. Great presentation to frame your well chosen words.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    Hi, my responses are getting slower and slower, but your reviews are always appreciated
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mimi Linny
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Beautifully written personification piece that parallels the wonderful experience of spreading your wings on the beach, to gallop and play as if there is no other soul around - and you can just be you! Very nicely done!

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    A lovely review, thank you very much
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very pretty and well written poem for the picture this challenge. You used very good descriptive words to go with the beautiful art work. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
    Hi Teri, thank you so much.Blessings to you as well
    Hugs, Trisha