A dog's life
Being a dog rocks.17 total reviews
Comment from violet11
very nice poem about a dog , I also like this because it is a fun poem
It is easy to read
For suggestions I would suggest maybe either re wording the second part of this poem or maybe talking about something else dogs may do
I really like the ending of this poem though about the dog being a happie chappie and the ending where you say ''woof''
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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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very nice poem about a dog , I also like this because it is a fun poem
It is easy to read
For suggestions I would suggest maybe either re wording the second part of this poem or maybe talking about something else dogs may do
I really like the ending of this poem though about the dog being a happie chappie and the ending where you say ''woof''
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Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Many thanks.
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your welcome
Comment from jdrhye
Cute....you have put it simply in a dogs voice...it's cute and catchy and all very true! Well for a happily kept dog....I can imagine this pup enjoying himself with even a doggy smile. Nice job. The flow, rhythm and rhyme are all good. The tone is light and fun.
J
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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Cute....you have put it simply in a dogs voice...it's cute and catchy and all very true! Well for a happily kept dog....I can imagine this pup enjoying himself with even a doggy smile. Nice job. The flow, rhythm and rhyme are all good. The tone is light and fun.
J
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018
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So glad you enjoyed it. Many thanks.
Comment from LIJ Red
Sounds like my Chihuahua, except he has a foul temper and curses(I think) a lot when things don't go to suit him. Excellent doggy POV poem, I think.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Sounds like my Chihuahua, except he has a foul temper and curses(I think) a lot when things don't go to suit him. Excellent doggy POV poem, I think.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Thanks for reading and reviewing. What's POV ?
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Point of view. You were writing from the dog's point of view.
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Of course. duh. Thanks.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I spend lots of time
Licking my nuts
and when I'm out
sniffing other dog's butts. '
This made me laugh so much! A hilarious and sweet write. It really did make me smile :) The above was hilarious, the whole poem composed so well kindest regards and well done love Meia x
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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I spend lots of time
Licking my nuts
and when I'm out
sniffing other dog's butts. '
This made me laugh so much! A hilarious and sweet write. It really did make me smile :) The above was hilarious, the whole poem composed so well kindest regards and well done love Meia x
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Thank you Meia. So glad you e jlyed kt. Jen. X
Comment from tony bronk
At first my trifocals read "A dogs life sucks" I couldn't understand? A funny, witty well written poems. My cat has a great life too!My dog, when alive was very much spoiled!! Iony
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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At first my trifocals read "A dogs life sucks" I couldn't understand? A funny, witty well written poems. My cat has a great life too!My dog, when alive was very much spoiled!! Iony
Comment Written 06-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018
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Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a nicely written poem!
It's well-worded, and has a nice flow to each line. I think you accurately described the everyday life of a dog.
This is funny to read, and I enjoyed it.
Great work :)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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This is a nicely written poem!
It's well-worded, and has a nice flow to each line. I think you accurately described the everyday life of a dog.
This is funny to read, and I enjoyed it.
Great work :)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Many thanks.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi anon, this is such a cute entry to the contest. It made me laugh and I wondered who had written it. A male I think, with a good sense of humour. Good rhyme and amusing content Woof! Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Hi anon, this is such a cute entry to the contest. It made me laugh and I wondered who had written it. A male I think, with a good sense of humour. Good rhyme and amusing content Woof! Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Your'e wrong. A female. Thanks a lot Jen x
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem of being a dog. We often think we have a dog's life when things seem a little bad. Your poem makes the dog's life a Royal life with lots of things just to enjoy.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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A very well-written poem of being a dog. We often think we have a dog's life when things seem a little bad. Your poem makes the dog's life a Royal life with lots of things just to enjoy.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Thanks Sandra
Comment from Pamusart
Well, the message is clear in this one. Lol. Humorous and well written. This is a good entry for the contest. I often wish I were a pampered cat. My cat is pampered and I know what a Cush life he has. No work to stress him. He does not go outside. So, no dogs or wild animals to worry about. Then, I realize I would be bored because I would not have hands. Nice composition. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Well, the message is clear in this one. Lol. Humorous and well written. This is a good entry for the contest. I often wish I were a pampered cat. My cat is pampered and I know what a Cush life he has. No work to stress him. He does not go outside. So, no dogs or wild animals to worry about. Then, I realize I would be bored because I would not have hands. Nice composition. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for yur great comments.
Comment from Cycler
Very humorous! Yeah, I often thought a dog's life is pretty good - except in below zero weather having to go outside to take care of bodily functions - or in the middle of a monsoon. But then, my dogs always make me go out with them - they won't do anything without a leash on.
Back to your thoughts, yes, a dog's life is pretty simple and that in itself is a wonderful quality to strive for.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Very humorous! Yeah, I often thought a dog's life is pretty good - except in below zero weather having to go outside to take care of bodily functions - or in the middle of a monsoon. But then, my dogs always make me go out with them - they won't do anything without a leash on.
Back to your thoughts, yes, a dog's life is pretty simple and that in itself is a wonderful quality to strive for.
Nice poem
Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
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Many thanks for your comments.
