a zone of confidence
off the question lies the zone of confidence6 total reviews
Comment from Tbjchild
I see the potential of this poem however it gets repetitive and confusing to follow all the way through. It often seems forced to fit into a certain expression rather than getting the message across with the freedom of your words. I would like to see what you can write using your words without restrictions.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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I see the potential of this poem however it gets repetitive and confusing to follow all the way through. It often seems forced to fit into a certain expression rather than getting the message across with the freedom of your words. I would like to see what you can write using your words without restrictions.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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thank your for the time of day for your review,tbjchild! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written with great theme and imagery.
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Dr Ricky 1024.Later today.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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This was well written with great theme and imagery.
Adjective Content-*****
Objective Content-*****
Grammar and Flow-******
Pronunciation-*****
Pronouncements-****
Descriptive Measures-*****
Complete Synopsis-*****
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,dr ricky! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from Sherman541
I love the picture very interesting and intriguing. The poem is a bit hard to follow and read. I will be honest, it is not something that I would ever try to write and reading it takes a bit of getting used to. I understand you are looking for a niche that you like and I applaud that. I believe, that you speak of questions, many kinds of questions and they have zones, then you explain the zones as, basic, Confidence and maturity levels. I may have understood or I may have missed the point or message, you are trying to convey. Sherman541
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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I love the picture very interesting and intriguing. The poem is a bit hard to follow and read. I will be honest, it is not something that I would ever try to write and reading it takes a bit of getting used to. I understand you are looking for a niche that you like and I applaud that. I believe, that you speak of questions, many kinds of questions and they have zones, then you explain the zones as, basic, Confidence and maturity levels. I may have understood or I may have missed the point or message, you are trying to convey. Sherman541
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,sherman541! also your point of view is correct and i would like to also suggest that science can be a question,desire,or basic. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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You are welcome ;) Glad I got the meaning :)
Comment from Pamusart
I get two things out of this. The first is the comparison between basic and all of those other things. Basic is all of those things. It is called basic because it is routine or it is studied extensively. That takes maturity and fortitude. But, how did it get to be basic? Easy to learn, easy to feel, easy to see or hear. Or, well learned by rote. Emotions do not work this way. What is a "basic" emotion. No such thing. Basic instincts but not basic emotions. Emotion is a very strong feeling that is hard to share. Every trait you mentioned is intellectual. So, think, See with your logical mind.
The second thing relates to the wording "off the question" being here, there and everywhere. I believe it means to ask more questions. Don't stop with an answer to a basic question. Ask more questions in your quest for knowledge. With knowledge, there is confidence and maturity. As you can see, your poem was a nice read for me. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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I get two things out of this. The first is the comparison between basic and all of those other things. Basic is all of those things. It is called basic because it is routine or it is studied extensively. That takes maturity and fortitude. But, how did it get to be basic? Easy to learn, easy to feel, easy to see or hear. Or, well learned by rote. Emotions do not work this way. What is a "basic" emotion. No such thing. Basic instincts but not basic emotions. Emotion is a very strong feeling that is hard to share. Every trait you mentioned is intellectual. So, think, See with your logical mind.
The second thing relates to the wording "off the question" being here, there and everywhere. I believe it means to ask more questions. Don't stop with an answer to a basic question. Ask more questions in your quest for knowledge. With knowledge, there is confidence and maturity. As you can see, your poem was a nice read for me. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,pamusart! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment from karenina
Your style is avant garde, unusual, an acquired taste...I read it and waked away and came back to read it anew. I believe in your passion but find I cannot quite capture it for myself...perhaps with more exposure to your work...as in abstract painting, the meaning lies in the eye of the beholder... What I DID pick up is true confidence comes from within, outside the traditional box society likes to place us in....I'm curious if that is even close to what you were attempting to convey...
I applaud anyone brave enough to go off the traditional path and connect in a unique way....
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Your style is avant garde, unusual, an acquired taste...I read it and waked away and came back to read it anew. I believe in your passion but find I cannot quite capture it for myself...perhaps with more exposure to your work...as in abstract painting, the meaning lies in the eye of the beholder... What I DID pick up is true confidence comes from within, outside the traditional box society likes to place us in....I'm curious if that is even close to what you were attempting to convey...
I applaud anyone brave enough to go off the traditional path and connect in a unique way....
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,karenina! i was relating to as there is more confidence in science and with this relation science can give us the true meaning of when time is exsisted. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
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Ah, that shines a bit more light....but would it not be " you're (not your) so VAIN (not vein as in blood vessel?)---
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks there is basics for a basic question and basic answer, maturity and there is a zone of confidence to each; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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This speaks there is basics for a basic question and basic answer, maturity and there is a zone of confidence to each; well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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thank you for the time of day for your review,dr alcreator! "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
