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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks father realizes why Lord took his only son away from him so early, and all lights went away, leaving darkness, but question still remains; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. WRITE, INSPIRE MAN CHANGE. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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This speaks father realizes why Lord took his only son away from him so early, and all lights went away, leaving darkness, but question still remains; well worded, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. WRITE, INSPIRE MAN CHANGE. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks for tour message and review Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from rjuselius
Even though words are never enough to encounter the pain of a lost loved one, especially one of a child. I still wsnt to express my condolances.
Thanks for sharing this delicate piece!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Even though words are never enough to encounter the pain of a lost loved one, especially one of a child. I still wsnt to express my condolances.
Thanks for sharing this delicate piece!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks Rebekka for your wonderful review and time.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the painful passing away of Jay and how it has caused untold hardship for the protagonist.
The work highlights his helplessness, the seeming aloofness of God to his plight and how only God appears to be having his way.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphors, oxymorons, irony and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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The work reminisces the painful passing away of Jay and how it has caused untold hardship for the protagonist.
The work highlights his helplessness, the seeming aloofness of God to his plight and how only God appears to be having his way.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphors, oxymorons, irony and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks Lloyd and always a pleasure.
Have A blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from apky
I am still here reading more of your fabulous poems in free style.
I have come to know how much your Jason means to you and how
much losing him changed your life.
"The Music stopped and my Broken Heart hit the floor!"
"My Cup of Runneth Over spilled and you drained my Bottle...
"Of, Chill Pills?"
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"My Soul Shattered and Scattered to...
'The Four Ends of Pretends?'
"And, my Body started to Shiver and Quiver?"
"The Lights Went down...
"The Curtains drawn...
"The Music Seized and Dark replaced the Dawn?"
Bless you, Doc Ricky,
Aki
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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I am still here reading more of your fabulous poems in free style.
I have come to know how much your Jason means to you and how
much losing him changed your life.
"The Music stopped and my Broken Heart hit the floor!"
"My Cup of Runneth Over spilled and you drained my Bottle...
"Of, Chill Pills?"
...
"My Soul Shattered and Scattered to...
'The Four Ends of Pretends?'
"And, my Body started to Shiver and Quiver?"
"The Lights Went down...
"The Curtains drawn...
"The Music Seized and Dark replaced the Dawn?"
Bless you, Doc Ricky,
Aki
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks and those Metaphors just poured out!with the pain....
Which always and ever....
Remains..
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Oh Ricky, I really do feel your pain and if it's any consolation to you I will be praying for you but I love your writing I feel every morsel of it because it is from the heart and your heart is full of pain and grief. I will be praying that God will lift the grief but out of your pain comes great quality and inspirational readings. I don't know all the details of the death of your son but what I will say is and this and it comes in love please don't allow yourself to get bitter with God he is all wise and all knowing and He loves us. I'm not sure of why He purposed or alliwed your son to go at the time that he did but God Knows Best. And I know that this does not relieve the pain and the grief that you feel but just know in your heart that he is in a better place of Eternal peace and one day you will see him again, so cherish that and look forward to it. God bless you. Again a good heart felt poem
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Oh Ricky, I really do feel your pain and if it's any consolation to you I will be praying for you but I love your writing I feel every morsel of it because it is from the heart and your heart is full of pain and grief. I will be praying that God will lift the grief but out of your pain comes great quality and inspirational readings. I don't know all the details of the death of your son but what I will say is and this and it comes in love please don't allow yourself to get bitter with God he is all wise and all knowing and He loves us. I'm not sure of why He purposed or alliwed your son to go at the time that he did but God Knows Best. And I know that this does not relieve the pain and the grief that you feel but just know in your heart that he is in a better place of Eternal peace and one day you will see him again, so cherish that and look forward to it. God bless you. Again a good heart felt poem
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks Mary and Jay thanks you too!
Dr. Ricky 1024
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Prayer changes things in my prayer is that the spirit of peace will overwhelmed your grieving heart.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Ricky. I don't have any specific answer but I would like to share with you something that a friend shared with me when I was so worried that my son would not live. He said deb, we come into life and make a contract with God on what we are to do in that life. My contract is different than your contract as is every life that happens. Perhaps the contracts that were made between your son and God were fulfilled and your son was taken after he had fulfilled his life's work as contracted at the beginning. And maybe what you deal with every single day of your life is part of what your contract with God is. I don't know, but it did help me and I hope it helps you just a little too. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Hi Ricky. I don't have any specific answer but I would like to share with you something that a friend shared with me when I was so worried that my son would not live. He said deb, we come into life and make a contract with God on what we are to do in that life. My contract is different than your contract as is every life that happens. Perhaps the contracts that were made between your son and God were fulfilled and your son was taken after he had fulfilled his life's work as contracted at the beginning. And maybe what you deal with every single day of your life is part of what your contract with God is. I don't know, but it did help me and I hope it helps you just a little too. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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hi Deborah I didn't know your first thing was the kiwi grow first name was Debra but I have a woman named Barb that lost both her twin sons and their spouses in in the car accident once and she and I have a pretty good connection with that so I didn't know you hit your son was in trouble I hope he didn't have to go above but if he did I'm sure him and Jason are playing poker in heaven and gambling on who's going to get the next hot angel thanks for this doctor Ricky 10:24 and have a blessed day
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yeah your friend Barb is a good friend to me as well ... she is awesome! No my boy Jackson is still here but the issue is not resolved or under control, just working towards a solution. My youngest son however is 28 so he made it past the teens ... thanks Ricky. Take care. xx debs
