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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Vampyre!"
My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."

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Comment from mkflood
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Art by Cleo?? Ricky have i done something to you to put my work there and claim it to be from another artist?..at least fanstory shows that the artwork is by me but confused you put Cleo's name in. I've known Cleo for years and never known her to show any interest in True Blood series. I'm not upset if you use other artist..it just confuses me when you pick my work and give other artists credit.. MKFlood

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
    First I selected Cleo but since it was in an edit mode...
    It wasn't accepted Mike.
    It isn't completed.
    Check later for the correct artist.
    I was in a hurry to catch the bus.
    Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment from apky
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Oh I don't think I'd stay for this one, Doc.
I'd run as far as my legs could carry me. But again,
good strong words here to accompany the poem.
I didn't know you were in any sense on some
know-a-bit vampire type of personality (I dread vampires!)

Bless you,
Apky

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
    You are much more pretty than my main characters!
    Ricky...
Comment from Zue65
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There are some slips but perhaps this is just the introduction. The readers may expect some excitement in the next post, I guess. Thanks for sharing. God bless.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
    Had to catch a bus and missed it!
    Most will be presented before 1.
    Dr. Ricky1024