Comment from Pete54

Excellent

This is a good piece for the death in nature haiku contest. It is technically correct in its form and conveys the image of the cycle of life and death easily. Good luck with this one. Pete54

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is a beautiful response to the prompt. We see death in nature, and it reminds us that there is a time for everything. This is the life cycle, and there is an end. An appointed time for everything. The picture is lovely, and it goes well with your poem, showing the dying leaves in a circle around the green leaf. That is indeed the cycle of life. Great presentation, and good luck. judi

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

An excellent entry in this "death in nature 5/7/5 contest" an excellent piece of artwork to ekphrasticaly hallmark your work, death is merely transition, sort of circular in motion, well dine, good effort, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for the good review. I appreciate it!

reply by royowen on 28-Feb-2018

Most welcome

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 15-7-5 Death in Nature writing contest.
Your verse has a clear story in so few words.
Well done, and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you.