Comment from samantha0930

Excellent

I like your poem, about the circle of life and death I believe. I also really like the picture you chose to accompany your poem.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author with you picture and your haiku about nature is true of how each season changes (has its own cycle)
as all creation ends in
its appointed time.
Gert

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018

Thanks for your good review and comments. I appreciate you taking the time to review.

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Mar-2018

You are welcome
Gert

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a well-written haiku. To everything there is a season. In your two words, turn turn, you evoke Ecclesiastes and the Byrds's famous song. Your photo shows the cycle of life. Your words take the leaves from creation to their appointed time. Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018

Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to review it.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very nice of how nature changes and one moment alive to dying at its appointed time. the artwork is stunning. thank you for sharing this well penned poem and it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for your comments and thoughts. I appreciate you taking the time to review.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like the message of this talking about creation. There truly is an appointed time and season for all things. You did a fine job writing this. Thanks for sharing this. Well done.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. I appreciate it!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 about death in nature that will happen one or other time in the normal life cycle. An excellent picture to illustrate the life of a leave which also represent the life of human.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you Sandra for the great review. I appreciate your thoughts and comments ... really! Have a great day!

Comment from Jane S.

Excellent

This is a fantastic haiku! It's a small poem, but you captured the message so clearly. The picture relates wonderfully as well. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughts and comments.

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I am admittedly not a fan of, nor an accomplished poet in this form of poetry however, I have seen enough to know when it is done well and this is a great example! I cannot suggest anything to improve it in any way and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thanks so much for your comments and review. I truly appreciate your thoughts!

reply by His Grayness on 28-Feb-2018

You are indeed very welcomed! Vance

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

Wow, you chose a great picture to go with your haiku or a good haiku to go with your picture..not sure which one came first. Perfect death in nature' haiku contest entry. you followed the 5-7-5 syllable count nicely. Good imagery. Good luck int eh contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you so much for your review and comments. I really appreciate your thoughts!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Did you take that picture? I love it! And your words are perfect and true and chilling and we all have our life span and we begin, we have fun and then it's over, you said it all in a few short words here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thanks so much, Dolly. I appreciate your thoughts and comments.