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FAMILY TIES.

Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "Lost and Found."
"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

4 total reviews 
Comment from Marge Setzer
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I love it. Temper never wins. Congratulations on "tempering" yours. Now you must tell just how you did it. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for more. Marge

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

Comment from flylikeaneagle
Exceptional
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rhonnie69: stars back at ya. My birthday is Wednesday. I'll be 25 again.
God restores our youth like the eagles - psalm 103 - holding onto this.

WOW~ great story and guidance to be respectful of parents and keep
your lunch card. Super rhymes and moral to the poem.

I think your story about God touching you is amazing. Divine story to share
and witness about Jesus. Thank you for your kindness in sharing with me.
Are you having your story published? Greater things we will do with Jesus.
Keep me posted in your journey.

God bless. flylikeaneagle - nancy

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    Hi Nan: it's me again. Thank you for using your valuable time to communicate with me as my friend. You didn't have to do it...but you did. And I thank you. In response to your request in reference to my having my story published: yes. I intend to have my story published in the near future. Currently I'm working to publish, "A CLASS A ACT." For further information, just log on to my portfolio to that entry. This work will not only be a short story book, but it is also a stage play. I'm busy working on getting this completed first. Nan, I shall keep you posted in my journey. And, please keep me posted in yours, my friend. Thanks, Nan. See ya' real soon. rhonnie69. P,S. I'm already published. Please scroll down to the bottom of my profile page for information.
Comment from His Grayness
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Very delightful little ditty with great rhythm and lots of fun all around. I cannot offer anything to improve this joyful work! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks you live your days God gifts you by keeping control over your anger and respecting your parents, you lose nothing; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018