Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

SO BEAUTIFUL! Where is this photo taken. So neat and sweet to meet a lover who doesn't just love you for your money, as so many people do. You have a true lover, a love that is pure, enduring and long lasting. Good luck contest! WELL DONE. liberty justice

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thank you Liberty for reading and commenting on my poem. The picture is not mine. It was taken from FanStory's pictures.

Jo

Comment from Wabigoon

Exceptional

Jo
Well, I believe you. Which is pretty much all that matters with a CW song, which is how I see your poem a bit. But I don't think you're kidding or using this theme for the sake of the poem. I think you've been there, felt it.

Thanks
Jeff

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks , Jeff, for the review. I always appreciate you.The six stars add icing on the cake. Yes, the poem is from my heart like all or at least most of my work. I don't know how to write any other way.🙄

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Powerful message in your poem. Love IS fickle at times. But as you write:
When it's right it flows
Time has been the test

The road to love is often difficult and filled with different goals and perceptions...as you so aptly have penned in your verse. Well-crafted!
Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for your review. I'm afraid I have been late in getting my thank you's written. Life happening.🌝

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I just read your tribute to your "cowboy" husband. You must have a wonderful relationship with him. You write so lovingly about your relationship. That is inspirational. This poem is as well done as the other. I don't know which one I like the best. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks , Debbie, for your review. Yes, I'm crazy for my loving husband.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poem writing prompt.
It tells a clear story in your well rhymed verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks , Sharon, for your well wishes.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Loving someone just for their money never works, it only ends in tears. Money does not make someone good and kind I'm afraid your poem is poignant, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thanks for reading both my poems.

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Love is fickle, sad, happy and so much, much more. I really like the descriptions you have given and the topics about money, health, wealth and style. I think the rhyming is great too. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

So glad you read my work and commented.

reply by Sherman541 on 18-Mar-2018

you are welcome ;)

Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

Good job on your work. I feel like there could be a whole Hallmark movie based off of this, Boy makes a superficial mistake, gets close to Girl for the wrong reasons, sees the true her and falls in love forever. It is like you say, time is the true measure (test).

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

You are too kind with your review. It's nice you took the time to read my poems.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very nice, love the rhyme pattern, works well. True love is great money or problems just don't seem to matter as long as you have one another. thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

William, you are so right with your comment on my work. Thank you for your review.