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On handling fear

Face what you rear

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Comment from A. Willow Bends
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A great job for a 1-6-1 Tough to get these out sometimes. Creatively done. I like it. I also do not think a photo could have helped this one. Fear is FEAR alone by itself and you did well to simply use your words on this one. Good job!
Wendy

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
    Thanks!
Comment from Bichon
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Great job with this one. It's hard to tell a story with such few words and syllabels, but you have done a fantastic job. Best of luck in the contest,

Chloe.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    I was the only one not to receive a vote. I?ll keep working at it.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
    I was the only one not to receive a vote. I?ll keep working at it.
Comment from rama devi
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Very clever and wise. Well worded for this contest. Indeed, challenges build character. Warm welcome to Fanstory. I look forward to reading more from you.

Smiles,
rd

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
    You are like kind
Comment from Pamusart
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This is a good entry for the contest. It is uplifting and hopeful. Thank you for sharing it. It follows the rules for the contest. The rhyming works. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    Thanks
Comment from Debbie Pope
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This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 contest. To me, that was a hard category. You had to say something substantive in so
Few words. And make it rhyme to boot. You did all that. Good job.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    Lots of good entries that were quite clever -,
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. When we tackle our fears head on we see it was never as big as we imagined it to be. Once conquerred we can take on another fear.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
    well said
Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is very nicely written!
You adhered to the poem requirements, while conveying a truly inspiring message to all of us. This teaches us to face our fears, and only then will we be able to live a more courageous life.
Great work :)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    Thank you : )
Comment from royowen
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An excellent entry in 1/6/1 poetry contest. You've managed to write a lot in this articulate gem, yes indeed you're spot on. My wife overcame agoraphobia by facing it front on. Well done good job, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A contemplative write with a positive theme, few words but profound meaning, I wish you luck with the contest, challenges are the sparks of life, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    we have to stop meeting this way - people might begin to talk ; )
Comment from victor 66
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Your syllable count of one - six - one is right on and you express a clear message that is understandable. Good luck in the contest for I suspect you will do quite well.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
    you are kind